In this contemporary world, construction of the zoos has become quite common. While some individuals believe that there is no need for such places. I personally agree with the given statement. This essay will discuss the supporting arguments to support my opinion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that these places provide a confined area for all the caged animals instead of their large natural habitat. As a result, these animals develop unhealthy habits such as roaming side by side, sitting at a particular place. For instance, lion and tiger who generally can roam anywhere in the forests and can cover distances of several kilometres, but are forced to live in the congested areas in a zoo. In short, zoos must be closed as these places steal the independence of the wild creatures.
Another fact is that while living in certain places, animals may get prone to a variety of diseases. This is because hundreds of creatures live together from various climatic conditions in these man made environment. To cite an example, the Asian elephants fell ill as a result of catch of disease from the African elephants in an African zoo. To recapitulate, it is a wise idea to abandon the existence of zoos in order to prevent our wildlife from further epidemics.
In conclusion, a vast majority of people favour the abolition of wildlife conserve in the modern era. I, however, opine that they are right in thinking so because such synthetic atmospheres are only curbing the independent nature of our wild creatures and are further making them predators to the dangerous diseases. 
In this contemporary world, construction of the zoos has become quite common. While  
some
 individuals believe that there is no need for such  
places
. I  
personally
  agree
 with the  
given
 statement. This essay will discuss the supporting arguments to support my opinion.
To  
begin
 with, there is no doubt that these  
places
 provide a confined area for all the caged animals  
instead
 of their large natural habitat.  
As a result
, these animals develop unhealthy habits such as roaming side by side, sitting at a particular  
place
.  
For instance
, lion and tiger who  
generally
 can roam anywhere in the forests and can cover distances of several  
kilometres
,  
but
  are forced
 to  
live
 in the congested areas in a zoo. In short, zoos  
must
  be closed
 as these  
places
 steal the independence of the wild creatures.
Another fact is that while living in certain  
places
, animals may  
get
 prone to a variety of diseases. This is  
because
 hundreds of creatures  
live
 together from various climatic conditions in these  
man
 made environment. To cite an example, the Asian elephants fell ill  
as a result
 of catch of disease from the African elephants in an African zoo. To recapitulate, it is a wise  
idea
 to abandon the existence of zoos in order to  
prevent
 our wildlife from  
further
 epidemics. 
In conclusion
, a vast majority of  
people
  favour
 the abolition of wildlife conserve in the modern era. I,  
however
, opine that they are right in thinking  
so
  because
 such synthetic atmospheres are  
only
 curbing the independent nature of our wild creatures and are  
further
 making them predators to the  
dangerous
 diseases.