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Everyday traffic seems to get worse on our roads. how can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers? v.1

Everyday traffic seems to get worse on our roads. how can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers? v. 1
Traffic congestion is now becoming a global problem. It is undeniable that the automotive industry has blessed our lives with many comforts but this blessing proved to be unpleasant in the face of traffic congestion. This will create worse situations on our roads. This is mainly because of high volume of vehicles and the inadequate infrastructure and cart pooling and use public transport, massively, could solve this problem. To initiate with, there is a myraid of reasons for the increase in traffic. In the modern era, due to the advent of technology, number of cars increases for the roadways which sometime block the roads. For instance, many people have their own vehicles and they use then for office as well as for their daily routine which usually block roads in almost all cities. Moreover, lack of infrastructure such as traffic signals sync out and inadequate green time are also the causes of traffic jams. There are many alternatives to handle the aforementioned issues and to avoid congestion. They are fewer cars and trucks on the road, increase in mass transit options etcetera. In addition, it is necessary to build these pedestrian overpass and more lanes in the street in order to reduce traffic and accidents. People should use car pooling or two-wheeler vehicles instead of taking car in public places especially during festivals. To conclude, single flower can not make the garland, so, government and society should encourage people to use public transport or vehicles with small size such as bicycles or make tax on private vehicles. Traffic problems should be controlled if checked strategically and impose it wisely.
Traffic
congestion is
now
becoming a global problem. It is undeniable that the automotive industry has blessed our
lives
with
many
comforts
but
this blessing proved to be unpleasant in the face of
traffic
congestion. This will create worse situations on our
roads
. This is
mainly
because
of high volume of
vehicles
and the inadequate infrastructure and cart pooling and
use
public transport,
massively
, could solve this problem.

To initiate with, there is a
myraid
of reasons for the increase in
traffic
. In the modern era, due to the advent of technology, number of
cars
increases for the roadways which sometime block the
roads
.
For instance
,
many
people
have their
own
vehicles and
they
use
then for office
as well
as for their daily routine which
usually
block
roads
in almost all cities.
Moreover
, lack of infrastructure such as
traffic
signals sync out and inadequate green time are
also
the causes of
traffic
jams.

There are
many
alternatives to handle the aforementioned issues and to avoid congestion. They are fewer
cars
and trucks on the
road
, increase in mass transit options etcetera.
In addition
, it is necessary to build these pedestrian overpass and more lanes in the street in order to
reduce
traffic
and accidents.
People
should
use
car
pooling or two-wheeler
vehicles
instead
of taking
car
in public places
especially
during festivals.

To conclude
, single flower can not
make
the garland,
so
,
government
and society should encourage
people
to
use
public transport or
vehicles
with
small
size such as bicycles or
make
tax on private
vehicles
.
Traffic
problems should
be controlled
if
checked
strategically
and impose it
wisely
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Everyday traffic seems to get worse on our roads. how can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6
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