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Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers? v.3

Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers? v. 3
Technology has helped us in every way and e-books are one of the examples for the same. Reading from paper book has its own merits, but e-books has proved to be more beneficial. This essay will discuss about my opinion on how the advantages of reading from e-books outweighs its disadvantages. E-books are more convenient than studying from paper books. We can read it any time and with an even less amount of light. For example, Kindle is the most friendly device for the readers. Without moving from a place we can easily buy books online, even browse it on the internet. We can not only read about a particular topic or a novel for free, but also we can do extensive research on that topic and gain more knowledge on the same screen. In addition, it helps to save trees and also does a bit to fight against global warming. Nevertheless, many people believe that paper books are more advantageous. The risk of viruses can corrupt the devices and can actually result in loosing of data. In spite, if we regularly use an antivirus in our system it can be protected from such attacks. Some people feel that e-books can harm their eyesight and even the harmful raises from the tool can cause them diseases in their bodies. But taking small intervals and avoiding long hours of extensive reading can easily solve such problems. To conclude, e-books are not only convenient, but also eco-friendly in the world. Therefore, the content in the books is easily available and accessible proving that its advantages undoubtedly outweighs its drawbacks.
Technology has
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helped
us in every way and e-books are one of the examples for the same. Reading from paper
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book
has its
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own
merits,
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but
e-books has proved to be more beneficial. This essay will
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discuss about my
opinion on how the advantages of reading from e-books outweighs its disadvantages.

E-books are more convenient than studying from paper
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books
. We can read it any time and with an even less amount of light.
For example
, Kindle is the most friendly device for the readers. Without moving from a place we can
easily
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buy
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books
online, even browse it on the internet. We can not
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only
read about a particular topic or a novel for free,
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but
also
we can do extensive research on that topic and gain more knowledge on the same screen.
In addition
, it
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helps
to save trees and
also
does a bit to fight against global warming.

Nevertheless
,
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many
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people
believe that paper
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books
are more advantageous. The
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risk
of viruses can corrupt the devices and can actually result in loosing of data. In spite, if we
regularly
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use
an antivirus in our system it can
be protected
from such attacks.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
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people
feel that e-books can harm their eyesight and even the harmful raises from the tool can cause them diseases in their bodies.
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But
taking
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small
intervals and avoiding long hours of extensive reading can
easily
solve such problems.

To conclude
, e-books are not
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only
convenient,
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but
also
eco-friendly in the world.
Therefore
, the content in the
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books
is
easily
available and accessible proving that its advantages
undoubtedly
outweighs its drawbacks.
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IELTS essay Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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