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Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare? v.3

Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare? v. 3
Healthy people build a healthy society and this is why it is a fundamental right for people. One should take care of one’s health but the people live below the poverty line cannot afford the expenses of medical checkups and to them, health care support must be provided by the state. However, there are certain drawbacks in providing free medical care. To begin with, the state must provide free health care to take care of the citizens, especially who can not afford expensive private healthcare services. Someone suffering from any severe health problem will be able to be diagnosed at the right time and consequently, the disease can be treated properly. Finally, the vaccines given at these centres would protect babies from dangerous diseases. The government has a responsibility to ensure proper medical services to its citizens and free health care for all is the way to achieve it. However, some people may consider these free health camps to be disadvantageous. It is certainly possible that the concerned corrupt authorities could misuse the funds allocated for free health service and offer poor medical treatment. As a result, the financial burden on a country rises. Moreover, some people may get habituated to visit a hospital for simple silly reasons and at times, one may overuse the free medicines available and get resist to that medicine which is very drastic. These days due to the advancement in science and technology, someone is able to determine any health abnormality at the initial level himself. For instance, the Intent has a great source of advice, tips and treatment prescribed by professional doctors and researchers that ordinary people can access and follow anytime. From this regards, people should follow a healthy lifestyle and access these free resources for their health benefits without burdening the government for their minor health-related issues. To conclude, the state policy should include poor citizens to the free health care services, impose a small fee for others and monitor the service offered to the people.
Healthy
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people
build a healthy society and this is why it is a fundamental right for
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people
. One should take
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care
of one’s
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health
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but
the
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people
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live
below the poverty line cannot afford the expenses of
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medical
checkups and to them,
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health
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care
support
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must
be provided
by the state.
However
, there are certain drawbacks in providing
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free
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medical
care.

To
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begin
with, the state
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must
provide
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free
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health
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care
to take
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care
of the citizens,
especially
who can not afford expensive private healthcare
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services
. Someone suffering from any severe
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health
problem will be able to
be diagnosed
at the right time and
consequently
, the disease can
be treated
properly
.
Finally
, the vaccines
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given
at these
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centres
would protect babies from
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dangerous
diseases. The
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government
has a responsibility to ensure proper
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medical
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services
to its citizens and
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free
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health
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care
for all is the way to achieve it.

However
,
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some
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people
may consider these
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free
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health
camps to be disadvantageous. It is
certainly
possible that the concerned corrupt authorities could misuse the funds allocated for
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free
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health
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service
and offer poor
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medical
treatment.
As a result
, the financial burden on a country rises.
Moreover
,
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some
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people
may
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get
habituated to visit a hospital for simple silly reasons and at times, one may overuse the
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free
medicines available and
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get
resist to that medicine which is
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very
drastic.

These days due to the advancement in science and technology, someone is able to determine any
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health
abnormality at the initial level himself.
For instance
, the Intent has a great source of advice, tips and treatment prescribed by professional doctors and researchers that ordinary
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people
can access and follow anytime. From
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this
regards,
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people
should follow a healthy lifestyle and access these
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free
resources for their
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health
benefits without burdening the
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government
for their minor health-related issues.

To conclude
, the state policy should include poor citizens to the
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free
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health
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care
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services
, impose a
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small
fee for others and monitor the
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service
offered to the
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people
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare? v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
334 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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