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Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare? v.1

Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare? v. 1
A government has many great responsibilities to its citizens and better health care for everyone is one of them. While free medical service is hard to maintain for a government with budget scarcity, it is a must to ensure a healthy nation. Some disadvantages are there but they can be controlled with strict laws and monitoring. To begin with, medical services and treatments are quite expensive and the majority of the people, even in a rich nation, can not afford it. This is why the government has to intervene and make the health care affordable for all and provide free services for poor citizens. It is natural that a great number of people avoid meeting doctors for minor diseases due to expensive medical services. Many of them end with major healthcare issues which could have been easily avoided if they were diagnosed at the initial level. In fact, the ratio of such diseases is quite high - according to a Health Care Review Committee Report published recently. Moreover, epidemic diseases are often spread among the destitute population and then affect the whole nation. If those poor citizens are out of proper medical treatment, this is a concern for the whole nations. Among downsides, free medical services often lack the quality and have fewer doctors, nurses and medical instruments. This makes the diagnosis of a disease harder and people often get poor services from such a free camp. They have to wait for a long and this is detrimental for patients who need emergency medical attention. Furthermore, the corruption often drains a large amount of money and adds burden to the government. However, these can all be controlled if proper measures are taken. In fact, the drawbacks of free public medical service are not good enough excuse to spot supporting it. To conclude, free health care service is a great way of ensuring medical treatments for all and every government should maintain it for the overall benefit of a nation.
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great responsibilities to its citizens and better
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for everyone is one of them. While
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to maintain for a
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with budget scarcity, it is a
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must to
ensure a healthy
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disadvantages are there
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with strict laws and monitoring.

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with,
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medical
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services
and treatments are quite expensive and the majority of the
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people
, even in a rich
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nation
, can not afford it. This is why the
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government
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has to
intervene and
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make
the
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health
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affordable for all and provide
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free
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services
for poor citizens. It is natural that a great number of
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people
avoid meeting doctors for minor
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diseases
due to expensive
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medical
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services
.
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Many
of them
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end
with major healthcare issues which could have been
easily
avoided if they
were diagnosed
at the initial level. In fact, the ratio of such
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diseases
is quite high
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according to a
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Health
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Care
Review Committee Report published recently.
Moreover
, epidemic
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diseases
are
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often
spread among the destitute population and then affect the whole
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nation
. If those poor citizens are out of proper
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medical
treatment, this is a concern for the whole nations.

Among downsides,
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free
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medical
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services
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often
lack the quality and have fewer doctors, nurses and
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medical
instruments. This
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makes
the diagnosis of a
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disease
harder and
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people
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often
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poor
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from such a
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camp. They
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wait for a long and this is detrimental for patients who need emergency
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medical
attention.
Furthermore
, the corruption
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often
drains a large amount of money and
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adds
burden to the
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government
.
However
,
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all
be controlled
if proper measures
are taken
. In fact, the drawbacks of
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public
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medical
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are not
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good
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enough
excuse to spot supporting it.

To conclude
,
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health
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care
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service
is a great way of ensuring
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medical
treatments for all and every
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government
should maintain it for the
overall
benefit of a
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nation
.
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IELTS essay Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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