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Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people’s health more and more people are eating it. 1) Why are more people eating fast food? 2) What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer with relevant examples v.1

Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people’s health more and more people are eating it. 1) Why are more people eating fast food? 2) What can be done about this problem? 1
Although medical practitioners around the globe are of the opinion that junk meal is terrible for human well-being, the populace eating it has increased. There are a myriad of factor responsible for the rising population who prefer consuming takeaway, however, various measures can be taken to cap how the public eats unhealthy snacks. This essay will elaborate on the grounds why people consume a ready meal and its possible remedy. There are plethoras of reasons responsible for the high consumption of takeout food. One of such motive is linked to busy work schedule. In other words, groups of the populace opt for eating out and this is due to the nature of their jobs. Undoubtedly, many people do not have the luxury of time to prepare home meals before leaving for work and as such turn to junk foods as their jobs involve working round the clock. For instance, an accountant who works in the bank as a teller arrives early and closes late as a result, they choose to eat whatever is sold on the street. In addition, an increasing number of people prefer to eat convenience food as it saves them the stress of going to the market and reduce the time spent in the kitchen. However, there are a number of approaches to tackle the numerous increase of the public eating takeaway food. One of such ways is planning ahead of the week and this is because when plans are put in place, home meal preparation will always be achieved ahead of the week without the option of fast food. For example, Sundays are not working days, which avails people the opportunity to go shopping and prep their meal for the week. Furthermore, another way in minimizing the junk food increase among the society is by employing the services of a chef. This is because the cook will compliment the time of the owner by carrying out market runs and in meal prep, the result of this will help reduce the upsurge of people eating outside and eliminate the stress of having to cook their meals. In conclusion, although there are uncountable rationales why an increasing amount of humans are consuming junk food, however, there are possible resolutions to combat this. This essay has elaborated in details the causes as well as the likely solutions.
Although medical practitioners around the globe are of the opinion that
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junk
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meal
is terrible for human well-being, the populace
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eating
it has increased. There are a
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myriad
of factor responsible for the rising population who prefer consuming takeaway,
however
, various measures can
be taken
to cap how the public eats unhealthy snacks. This essay will elaborate on the grounds why
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people
consume a ready
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meal
and its possible remedy.

There are
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plethoras
of reasons responsible for the high consumption of takeout
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food
. One of such motive
is linked
to busy work schedule.
In other words
, groups of the populace opt for
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eating
out and this is due to the nature of their jobs.
Undoubtedly
,
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many
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people
do not have the luxury of time to prepare home
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meals
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before
leaving for work and as such turn to
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junk
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foods
as their jobs involve working round the clock.
For instance
, an accountant who works in the bank as a teller arrives early and closes late
as a result
, they choose to eat whatever
is sold
on the street.
In addition
, an increasing number of
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people
prefer to eat convenience
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food
as it saves them the
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stress
of going to the market and
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reduce
the time spent in the kitchen.

However
, there are a number of approaches to tackle the numerous increase of the public
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eating
takeaway
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food
. One of such ways is planning ahead of the week and this is
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because
when plans
are put
in place, home
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meal
preparation will always
be achieved
ahead of the week without the option of
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fast
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food
.
For example
, Sundays are not working days, which avails
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people
the opportunity to go shopping and prep their
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meal
for the week.
Furthermore
, another way in minimizing the
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junk
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food
increase among the society is by employing the services of a chef. This is
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because
the cook will compliment the time of the owner by carrying out market runs and in
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meal
prep, the result of this will
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help
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reduce
the upsurge of
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people
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eating
outside and eliminate the
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stress
of having to cook their meals.

In conclusion
, although there are uncountable rationales why an increasing amount of humans
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are
consuming
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junk
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,
however
, there are possible resolutions to combat this. This essay has elaborated in
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details
the causes
as well
as the likely solutions.
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IELTS essay Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people’s health more and more people are eating it. 1) Why are more people eating fast food? 2) What can be done about this problem? 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
388 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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