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Evebody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Evebody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. with this statement? v. 1
Would someone like to be attempted by a dyslexic neurosurgeon? Nowadays, everybody is able to study, or at least tries to, anything in the academy. However, everybody is really capable to develop all skills? I do not agree that everyone should study some types of courses, as medicine, without being academically prepared. This is not a preconception. Indeed, there are some programs that need a specific skill; however, there are some people who do not have it or the capacity of developing it. For example, an individual illiterate is not able to join an English teaching course; it does not even make sense, unless this student learn to write and read before it. Secondly, the academy is an advanced level of knowledge, so, before joining in most of the courses, there are many abilities needed to do it. For instance, an individual that is not able to do math’s questions, will not survive in an engineering educational institution, this person must learn math until a level, where he will be able to understand the engineering program. Thirdly, to allow that unskilled student take a degree must be dangerous, as an illustration, a person who did not was approved in high school because of difficulties in math, join in an architecture course. During these all years of academy, the student is yet not sufficiently skilled, however, for some reason he gets a graduation. After the graduation, this unskilled professional get a job offer to construct a building, the possibilities of something do not go well are enormous. To sum up, the permission to get an educational degree for unprepared people should not be considered because I do believe that specific skills and a base of study before advanced subjects are important to the security and success of the individual and community.
Would someone like to
be attempted
by a dyslexic neurosurgeon? Nowadays, everybody is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to study, or at least tries to, anything in the academy.
However
, everybody is
really
capable to develop all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
? I do not
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agree
that everyone should study
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
, as medicine, without being
academically
prepared.

This is not a preconception.
Indeed
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
programs that need a specific
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
;
however
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who do not have it or the capacity of developing it.
For example
, an individual illiterate is not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
an English teaching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
; it does not even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sense, unless
The verb 'learn' is plural. Did you mean: "this student learns"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this student learn
to write and read
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
it.

Secondly
, the academy is an advanced level of knowledge,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
joining in most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
abilities needed to do it.
For instance
, an individual
that is
not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to do math’s questions, will not survive in an engineering educational institution, this person
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
learn math until a level, where he will be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to understand the engineering program.

Thirdly
, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
that unskilled student take a degree
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
, as an illustration, a person who did not
was approved
in high school
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of difficulties in math,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
in an architecture
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. During these all years of academy, the student is
yet
not
sufficiently
skilled,
however
, for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reason he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
a graduation. After the graduation, this unskilled professional
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a job offer to construct a building, the possibilities of something do not go well are enormous.

To sum up, the permission to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an educational degree for unprepared
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
should not
be considered
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I do believe that specific
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and a base of study
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
advanced subjects are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to the security and success of the individual and community.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Evebody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
300 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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