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Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons. First, th v.2

Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons. First, th v. 2
The reading passage and lecture have conflicting opinions about whether or not replacing gasoline for ethanol is really beneficial. The article strongly postulates that using ethanol instead of gasoline is unfavorable for three compelling reasons. On the other hand, the listening adamantly delinates that ethanol is a very good alternative for gasoline. Also, none of the three presented reasons are convincing. First and foremost, according to the author of the excerpt, global warming problem wouldn' t be solved by using more ethanol owing to the fact that using ethanol as fuel can release carbon dioxide like gasoline. Therefore, using more ethanol wouldn' t help to solve one of the biggest environmental issues. Nonetheless, the lecture offsets these points by declaring that using ethanol will not add problems to global warming. the released carbon dioxide from using ethanol as fuel can be compensated by cultivating more plants and trees that produce ethanol. In other words, farming corns can reduce carbon dioxide because plants absorb this harmful gas. On top of this, the professor in lecture further points out that on a large scale ethanol can be produced from plants using cellious. meaning that producing ethanol can meet the individual' s demands by producing ethanol from trees that aren' t eaten by animals. As a result, the animals wouldn' t suffer from food shortage. These claims refute the writer implication of how producing ethanol from plants would harm animals. Also, reduce the number of available trees. The article lastly asserts that using gasoline would cast people less because governments are already paying subsidies tax to people who produce ethanol. which means the ethanol price will increase dramatically if it' s used as fuel. The speaker in lecture counters these points by insisting that if there is more production of the ethanol the ethanol price would decrease.
The reading passage and
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have conflicting opinions about
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whether or not
replacing
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gasoline
for
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ethanol
is
really
beneficial. The article
strongly
postulates that using
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ethanol
instead
of
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gasoline
is unfavorable for three compelling reasons.
On the other hand
, the listening
adamantly
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delinates
that
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ethanol
is a
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very
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good
alternative for
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gasoline
.
Also
, none of the three presented reasons are convincing.

First
and foremost, according to the author of the excerpt, global warming problem
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wouldn&
#039; t
be solved
by using more
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ethanol
owing to the fact that using
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ethanol
as fuel can release carbon dioxide like
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gasoline
.
Therefore
, using more
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ethanol
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wouldn&
#039; t
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help
to solve one of the biggest environmental issues. Nonetheless, the
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lecture
offsets these points by declaring that using
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ethanol
will not
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add
problems to global warming.
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the
released carbon dioxide from using
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ethanol
as fuel can
be compensated
by cultivating more
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plants
and trees that produce
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ethanol
.
In other words
, farming corns can
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reduce
carbon dioxide
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because
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plants
absorb this harmful gas.

On top of this, the professor in
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lecture
further
points out that on a large scale
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ethanol
can
be produced
from
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plants
using
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cellious
.
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meaning
that producing
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ethanol
can
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meet
the
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individual&
#039; s demands by producing
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ethanol
from trees that
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aren&
#039; t eaten by animals.
As a result
, the animals
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wouldn&
#039; t suffer from food shortage. These claims refute the writer implication of how producing
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ethanol
from
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plants
would harm animals.
Also
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the number of available trees.

The article
lastly
asserts that using
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gasoline
would cast
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
less
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
are already paying subsidies tax to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who produce
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ethanol
.
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which
means the
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ethanol
price will increase
dramatically
if
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it&
#039; s
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used
as fuel. The speaker in
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lecture
counters these points by insisting that if there is more production of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
price would decrease.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons. First, th v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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