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Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons. First, th v.1

Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons. First, th v. 1
Language is the most import aspect of communication. Some part of the population believes that it is required to learn a foreign language because of work or travel to the specific countries. While others don't agree that this should be the only reason to learn new vocabulary. In my view, learning local communication mode is imperative to avoid confusions, in addition to that, it also helps in widening the view about how the language is created. Having a good command of foreign speech helps one to clearly project the thoughts to others. It helps one to smoothly complete the daily errands in other nations. Without having knowledge of local language, the conversation becomes tedious. For example, telling the destination to taxi drivers or buying items from hawkers wouldn't be easy if one doesn't know what the other person is speaking. Therefore, while travelling to a new country with a different language, it is necessary to learn it. Learning an alien language also helps in broadening the mindset of a person. He/She is able to understand the basic structure upon which a language is generally built upon. For instance, how the smallest component such as the alphabet is defined in different dialects. As a result, this may help a person to learn new scripts easily in future. To conclude, it should be the priority to understand foreign language while travelling to a new country as it helps in swift communication. Learning new language not only helps in better communication but also it helps to understand the basics about how the dialects are created in the first place.
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learn
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language
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because
of work or travel to the specific countries.
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agree
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learn
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new
vocabulary. In my view, learning local
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communication
mode is imperative to avoid confusions,
in addition
to that, it
also
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helps
in widening the view about how the
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language
is created
.

Having a
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good
command of foreign speech
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helps
one to
clearly
project the thoughts to others. It
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helps
one to
smoothly
complete the daily errands in
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other
nations. Without having knowledge of local
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language
, the conversation becomes tedious.
For example
, telling the destination to taxi drivers or buying items from hawkers wouldn't be easy if one doesn't know what the
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other
person is speaking.
Therefore
, while travelling to a
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new
country with a
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language
, it is necessary to
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learn
it.

Learning an alien
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language
also
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helps
in broadening the mindset of a person. He/She is able to understand the basic structure upon which a
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language
is
generally
built upon.
For instance
, how the smallest component such as the alphabet
is defined
in
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different
dialects.
As a result
, this may
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help
a person to
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learn
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new
scripts
easily
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, it should be the priority to understand foreign
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language
while travelling to a
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new
country as it
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helps
in swift
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communication
. Learning
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new
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language
not
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only
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helps
in better
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communication
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but
also
it
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helps
to understand the basics about how the dialects
are created
in the
first
place.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons. First, th v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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