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Essay topics: you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to you boss. in your lettertell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job v.1

Essay topics: you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to you boss. in your lettertell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job v. 1
Owning a vehicle is a symbol of the prestige and luxury, and of course, whom it does not appeal. These days, almost everyone owns a two wheeler or a four wheeler, which can be used to as a mode of transportation. In my perspective, I feel that relying on personal vehicle to a certain extent is okay, but it's inviting unavoidable situations such as traffic congestions and an increase in air pollution. To begin with, owning a vehicle gives freedom to an individual to roam anywhere and anytime. For example, there is no need to wait at a bus stop or at a subway station for a bus or a train, if the person owns the car. This definitely saves significant time of the person. Also, sometimes, one has to walk to the station as necessarily stations are not near from the home or from the office. Another advantage of having own vehicle is convenience and comfort. It is always easy to carry stuff after shopping or if one has a big family, then it's convenient and comfortable for elderly persons or for children. Sometimes, public transit is avoided because they are not clean. However, traffic congestion is one of the biggest problems society is facing. We see, the roads are flooded with cars and bikes, people like to use personal transportation rather than public. Government should promote public transportation and increase the awareness in the society about the impact of overusing personal vehicles. If public transit is cheap, clean and available more frequently, people will start using it more and more. Another issue of air pollution will be automatically addressed, if use of shared vehicles is encouraged. To conclude, dependence on the car as a transportation mode is increased because people want comfort, however, it raised more issues, such as traffic congestion and increased air pollution. I think that people must be encouraged to use more public and shared transit to avoid consequences of overusing own cars.
Owning a
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vehicle
is a symbol of the prestige and luxury, and
of course
, whom it does not appeal. These days, almost everyone
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owns
a
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two wheeler
or a
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four wheeler
, which can be
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used
to as a mode of
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transportation
. In my perspective, I feel that relying on personal
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vehicle
to a certain extent is okay,
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but
it's inviting unavoidable situations such as traffic congestions and an increase in air pollution.

To
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begin
with, owning a
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vehicle
gives freedom to an individual to roam anywhere and anytime.
For example
, there is no need to wait at a bus
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stop
or at a subway station for a bus or a train, if the person
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owns
the
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car
. This definitely saves significant time of the person.
Also
,
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sometimes
, one
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has to
walk to the station as
necessarily
stations are not
The usual collocation for "near" is "to" not "from". Did you mean simply "near to" or "further from"?
near from the
home or from the office. Another advantage of having
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own
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vehicle
is convenience and comfort. It is always easy to carry stuff after shopping or if one has a
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big
family, then it's convenient and comfortable for elderly persons or for children.
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Sometimes
,
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public
transit
is avoided
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because
they are not clean.

However
, traffic congestion is one of the biggest
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problems
society is facing. We
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see
, the roads
are flooded
with
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cars
and bikes,
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people
like to
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use
personal
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transportation
rather
than
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public
.
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Government
should promote
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public
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transportation
and increase the awareness in the society about the impact of overusing personal
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vehicles
. If
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public
transit is
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cheap
, clean and available more
frequently
,
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people
will
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start
using it more and more. Another issue of air pollution will be
automatically
addressed, if
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use
of shared
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vehicles
is encouraged
.

To conclude
, dependence on the
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car
as a
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transportation
mode
is increased
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
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people
want comfort,
however
, it raised more issues, such as traffic congestion and increased air pollution. I
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think
that
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be encouraged
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
and shared transit to avoid consequences of overusing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Essay topics: you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to you boss. in your lettertell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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