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ou are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference v.1

ou are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference v. 1
It is argued that the character and appearance of towns and cities change with the widespread of modern buildings. The government should protect the cultural heritage, by putting emphasis on building infrastructure inspired by traditional building style instead of contemporary style. I disagree with the statement. This essay will first discuss why modern buildings are necessary for nature and why building them won't affect the cultural identity. Firstly, changing infrastructure continuously with the current trend signifies why changing it with the environment is necessary. This is to say, today's buildings focus on designs, such as fibreglass designs, that are more eco-friendly, as compared to buildings that were built in the past. As a consequence, they will contribute towards a better environment in the future. For example, according to a report by The Times in 2018, it was found that countries that continuously adapt to infrastructure designs based on the environment's needs will have 50% less pollution than the countries that don't. Secondly, new designs won't affect the cultural identity, as these designs help preserve the current heritage of the community and link it with the past. In other words, these designs help the people in society understand the importance of the current values and beliefs and connect them with the past's culture. For instance, it was reported by The History Channel in 2018, that towns, that base their infrastructure with today's trends, understand and carry their orthodox traditions better than the cities that don't. In conclusion, this essay strongly believes that modern buildings are relevant as they help build infrastructure, which is good for nature and at the same time, they don't harm the cultural persona of a city if anything they help preserving the current persona and connect it with the past.
It
is argued
that the character and appearance of towns and cities
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change
with
The phrase 'the widespread of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the widespread of
modern
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buildings
. The
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government
should protect the
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cultural
heritage, by putting emphasis on
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building
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infrastructure
inspired by traditional
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building
style
instead
of contemporary style. I disagree with the statement. This essay will
first
discuss why modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
are necessary for nature and why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
them won't affect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cultural
identity.

Firstly
, changing
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infrastructure
continuously
with the
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current
trend signifies why changing it with the environment is necessary. This is to say,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
focus on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
designs
, such as
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fibreglass
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designs
, that are more eco-friendly, as compared to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
that
were built
in the past. As a consequence, they will contribute towards a better environment in the future.
For example
, according to a report by The Times in 2018, it
was found
that countries that
continuously
adapt to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
infrastructure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
designs
based on the environment's needs will have 50% less pollution than the countries that don't.

Secondly
, new
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designs
won't affect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cultural
identity, as these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
designs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
preserve the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
current
heritage of the community and link it with the past.
In other words
, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
designs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in society understand the importance of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
current
values and beliefs and connect them with the past's culture.
For instance
, it
was reported
by The History Channel in 2018, that towns, that base their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
infrastructure
with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's trends, understand and carry their orthodox traditions better than the cities that don't.

In conclusion
, this essay
strongly
believes that modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
are relevant as they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
build
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
infrastructure
, which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for nature and at the same time, they don't harm the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cultural
persona of a city if anything they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to preserve" or "preserve".
preserving
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
current
persona and connect it with the past.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay ou are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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