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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little To what extent do you agree or disagree v.2

Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little v. 2
These days, an online class has become widely popular and attractive in studying, especially for the scholar of colleges. Therefore, the numerous universities are providing an online classes for learning as an alternative, sources of studying in traditional classrooms. This essay will analyse the pros and cons of attending an online class. There are a number of advantages that come along with choosing an online learning. Firstly, studying an online path, it provides a flexible timing and convenient learning for pupil because, it allows them to learn their desirable subject on their appropriate time. This will help them to pursue knowledge and skills, staying in their own house. Secondly, online sessions will be more helpful for those students who lives far away from their college. For an instance, a student who wants to pass entrance examination does not have to go tuition, instead he can go to an online preparation area without going to of home. Hence, more the student tends to choose an online learning method rather than going to the classroom field. Even thought, online course has some merit, there are a few challenges that come with this phenomenon. The main disadvantage of this is that it makes less direct interaction between the teacher and learner. For example, graduate students will not get sufficient mentoring by teachers and they need to rely on only written communication which directly lead to few motivation and counselling. Moreover, many learners prefer traditional classroom as an effective method for learning subjects. In conclusion, several universities created online curriculum the second choice for students. However, this trend has prone and con. In my opinion, studying online is the best way for rapid progress and the betterment of the disciple. (280)
These days, an
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online
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class
has become
widely
popular and attractive in
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studying
,
especially
for the scholar of colleges.
Therefore
, the numerous universities are providing an
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online
classes for
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learning
as an alternative, sources of
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studying
in traditional classrooms. This essay will
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analyse
the pros and cons of attending an
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online
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class
.

There are a number of advantages that
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come
along with choosing an
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online
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learning
.
Firstly
,
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studying
an
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online
path, it provides a flexible timing and convenient
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learning
for pupil
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because
, it
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allows
them to learn their desirable subject on their appropriate time. This will
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help
them to pursue knowledge and
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skills
, staying in their
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own
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house
.
Secondly
,
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online
sessions will be more helpful for those
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students
who
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lives
far away from their college. For an instance, a
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student
who wants to pass entrance examination does not
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have to
go tuition,
instead
he can go to an
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online
preparation area without going to of home.
Hence
, more the
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student
tends to choose an
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online
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learning
method
rather
than going to the classroom field.

Even
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thought
,
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online
course has
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some
merit, there are a few challenges that
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come
with this phenomenon. The main disadvantage of this is that it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
less direct interaction between the teacher and learner.
For example
, graduate
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students
will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
sufficient mentoring by
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
teachers and
they need to rely on
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only
written communication which
directly
lead
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to
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few motivation
and counselling.
Moreover
,
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many
learners prefer traditional classroom as an effective method for
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learning
subjects.

In conclusion
, several universities created
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online
curriculum the second choice for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
.
However
, this trend has prone and con. In my opinion,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
is the best way for rapid progress and the betterment of the disciple. (280)
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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