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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. v. 1
Nowadays, with the modernization, there have been an eclectic mix of environment-related problems. It is believed that protecting environment is the responsibility of the government because these issues are too big for individuals to control. From my perspective, both politicians and residents should involve themselves together in environmental protection processes as reasons below. To begin with, even there are more than seven billion citizens in the world with radically different skin colors, religions, traditions, we live in the same house named the Earth. Whether our home is decorated with bright lights or trashes hugely depends on humans who are supposed to be head of the world as they have predominant abilities when compared to other species. Inhibiting the world’s annihilation is the responsibility of not only the heading government but also each individual. It is undeniable that each person can only do little thing but one small action multiplied by millions can transform the world. In addition, environmental laws introduced by the government are literally useless without one’s action and awareness. The government has a pivotal role in the process of conservation: first they are alleged to lead a society, the other is their influences and regulations. However, a community is a collective whole in which a social dilemma is only solved when people involve themselves in it, which means the duties of each person are of paramount importance. It is recommended that the administration launch campaigns to broaden people’s knowledge and indicate the consequences of a polluted world. Once these campaigns are completed and underway, the habitat and biodiversity will be protected and all species will stay strong and high as a result. In conclusion, I vigorously disagree that environmental protection should be left to only the government or one single person, it needs to be joined by both. As long as humans can be together, our mother Earth will not face environmental concerns as she is currently struggling now.
Nowadays, with the modernization, there have been an eclectic mix of environment-related problems. It
is believed
that protecting environment is the responsibility of the
government
because
these issues are too
big
for individuals to control. From my perspective, both politicians and residents should involve themselves together in
environmental
protection processes as reasons below.

To
begin
with, even there are more than seven billion citizens in the
world
with
radically
different
skin colors, religions, traditions, we
live
in the same
house
named the Earth. Whether our home
is decorated
with bright lights or trashes
hugely
depends on humans who
are supposed
to be head of the
world
as they have predominant abilities when compared to other species. Inhibiting the
world’s
annihilation is the responsibility of not
only
the heading
government
but
also
each individual. It is undeniable that each person can
only
do
little
thing
but
one
small
action multiplied by millions can transform the world.

In addition
,
environmental
laws introduced by the
government
are
literally
useless without one’s action and awareness. The
government
has a pivotal role in the process of conservation:
first
they
are alleged
to lead a society, the other is their influences and regulations.
However
, a community is a collective whole in which a social dilemma is
only
solved when
people
involve themselves in it, which means the duties of each person are of paramount importance. It
is recommended
that the administration launch campaigns to broaden
people
’s knowledge and indicate the consequences of a polluted
world
. Once these campaigns
are completed
and underway, the habitat and biodiversity will
be protected
and all species will stay strong and high
as a result
.

In conclusion
, I
vigorously
disagree that
environmental
protection should be
left
to
only
the
government
or one single person, it needs to be
joined
by both. As long as humans can be together, our mother Earth will not face
environmental
concerns as she is
currently
struggling
now
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
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