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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little v. 1
It is sometimes argued that only politicians could be solve environmental problems. However, I believe that protect environment is the responsibility of everyone. This essay will argue that resolving environmental issues is the responsibility of both individuals and governments. It is undeniable that the government plays an important role in solving serious problems environment. Major environmental issues such as global warming, floods, and prolonged drought need the government to address ways to end extreme weather events. In fact, in order to solve this problem, it is necessary to have many factors such as money, modern technology equipment and experienced scientists. For instance, The government spent a lot of money and effort to build waste treatment plants, and it took several years to research. Only governments can have power to solve environmental problems, without the government settling, individuals cannot solve it alone. On the other hand, individuals also need to take responsibility with environmental. People are protecting the environment in many ways like planting more trees or recycling rubbish. If individuals do not protect environment, governments will not be able to deal with this problem. For example, the government always calls for people to sort their waste and put it in the right place, but there are still people who throw it in the street. I believe that if politicians and individuals do not cooperate, problem environment will not be effectively tackled. In conclusion, I believe that protecting the environment is the obligation of both politicians and individuals. Individuals play an important role in helping the government solve the problem, however, only governments can have sufficient funds and resources to invest in this.
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sometimes
argued that
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only
politicians could be
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solve
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environmental
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problems
.
However
, I believe that protect
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environment
is the responsibility of everyone. This essay will argue that resolving
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environmental
issues is the responsibility of both
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individuals
and
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governments
.

It is undeniable that the
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government
plays an
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important
role in solving serious
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problems
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environment
. Major
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environmental
issues such as global warming, floods, and prolonged drought need the
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government
to address ways to
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end
extreme weather
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events
. In fact, in order to
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solve
this
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problem
, it is necessary to have
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many
factors such as money, modern technology equipment and experienced scientists.
For instance
, The
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government
spent
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a lot of
money and effort to build waste treatment plants, and it took several years to research.
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Only
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governments
can have power to
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solve
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environmental
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problems
, without the
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government
settling,
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individuals
cannot
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solve
it alone.

On the other hand
,
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individuals
also
need to take responsibility with
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environmental
.
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People
are protecting the
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environment
in
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many
ways like planting more trees or recycling rubbish. If
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individuals
do not protect
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environment
,
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governments
will not be able to deal with this
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problem
.
For example
, the
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government
always calls for
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people
to sort their waste and put it in the right place,
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but
there are
still
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people
who throw it in the street. I believe that if politicians and
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individuals
do not cooperate,
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problem
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environment
will not be
effectively
tackled.

In conclusion
, I believe that protecting the
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environment
is the obligation of both politicians and
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individuals
.
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Individuals
play an
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important
role in helping the
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government
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solve
the
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problem
,
however
,
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only
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governments
can have sufficient funds and resources to invest in this.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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