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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution why is this and how can this problem be solved v.2

Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution why is this and how can this problem be solved v. 2
There is no doubt that environment issues such as pollution are increasingly causing serious global problems in terms of climate change. Authorities have made efforts to solve the problems arised from rising global temperatures, however, they have achieved few solutions. This essay will first discuss the reason why this issue have not been solved yet and secondly provide a possible solution for it. Governments are still struggling to improve the environmental problems due that there is a lack of awarness about the real issue of climate change among people. Individuals have not taken into consideration the consequences that may arise from weather changes in the near future. This is because nowadays people believe that they still live in a normal planet and they do not think about the potential results of changes in global temperatures. To illustrate this, recent research has proven that only 10% of the population is aware about the future problems becoming from global rising temperatures. Therefore, creating more prevention campaigns is the manner to sort the negative impact that changes in temperature is making on the planet. Encouraging people to take certain measures plays an essential role to curb the planet’s harm. Hence, every single council should create climate change prevention campaigns in schools and universites. For example, authorities should promote people not to dump waste in public areas and enhance them to split the garbage into recycleable and non-recycleable items. To conclude, although governments often strive to prevent environmental changes, they should make more campains to avoid catastrophes. In addition, this is useless without a synergic actions between authorities and the awarness of indiviuals.
There is no doubt that environment issues such as pollution are
increasingly
causing serious
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global
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problems
in terms of climate
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change
. Authorities have made efforts to solve the
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problems
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arised
from rising
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global
temperatures,
however
, they have achieved few solutions. This essay will
first
discuss the reason why this issue have not
been solved
yet
and
secondly
provide a possible solution for it.

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Governments
are
still
struggling to
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improve
the environmental
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problems
due that there is a lack of
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awarness
about the real issue of climate
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change
among
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people
. Individuals have not taken into consideration the consequences that may arise from weather
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changes
in the near future. This is
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because
nowadays
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people
believe that they
still
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live
in a normal
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planet and
they do not
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think
about the potential results of
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changes
in
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global
temperatures. To illustrate this, recent research has proven that
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only
10% of the population is aware about the future
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problems
becoming from
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global
rising temperatures.

Therefore
, creating more prevention campaigns is the manner to sort the
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negative
impact that
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changes
in temperature is making on the planet. Encouraging
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people
to take certain measures plays an essential role to curb the planet’s harm.
Hence
, every single council should create climate
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change
prevention campaigns in schools and
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universites
.
For example
, authorities should promote
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people
not to dump waste in public areas and enhance them to split the garbage into
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recycleable
and
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non-recycleable
items.

To conclude
, although
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governments
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often
strive to
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prevent
environmental
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changes
, they should
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make
more
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campains
to avoid catastrophes.
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, this is useless without a
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synergic
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actions
between authorities and the
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awarness
of
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indiviuals
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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IELTS essay Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution why is this and how can this problem be solved v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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