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Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders To what extent do you agree or disagree Support your answer with specific reasons and examples v.8

Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders Support your answer with specific reasons and examples v. 8
Climate change is happening at an alarming rate, which lead to an argument that does it is relate to the discipline authority promulgated for inhabitants. Do the rule need to change? After numerous accidents occurred to planet, I strongly agree that laws should have the consider variation. In this essay, I will explain and give my opinion about this hot debate. Initially, the growth of population are leading to over hunting. Individuals demand are depend so much on wild life consumption. Naturally, some lawbreakers willing to hunt animals event that animals are on the verge of extinction. To satisfied people temporary interested dogs also become a part of meal in some several country despite the moral aspect. Moreover, some unethical person would pay numerous money to have rhino' s horns for decoration though one horn can harm one rhino badly. If one hundred people want to have rhino' s horn, one hundred rhino will be kill meaningless. In consequent, rhinoceros population will be blow out significant while also running animals food chain. In addition, enviroment change affect people life immediately. We can not live in a friendly world while the diversity of animals reducing, plant is illness also cause dangerous for human health. anything we eat have the chance to hurt our strength either occurs rare disease. All of this happen because of human responsibility as well as government has not punish them strictly. Everything they do claim their benefits first and has not put them into trouble so they continue break the rule without hesitate. In conclusion, authorities should seriously warn citizen what they will lost if natural disease exist. Regulation made to be more considerable to protect eco-system from unworthy events.
Climate
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change
is happening at an alarming rate, which lead to an argument that does it
Did you mean "be"? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
is
Consider using a past participle here: "related".
relate
to the discipline authority promulgated for inhabitants.
You should probably use "Does".
Do
the
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rule
need to
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change
? After numerous accidents occurred to planet, I
strongly
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agree
that laws should have
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'consider' is correct. If 'consider' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the consider
variation. In this essay, I will
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explain
and give my opinion about this hot debate.

Initially
, the growth of population are leading to over hunting. Individuals demand are depend
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so
much on wild life consumption.
Naturally
,
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some
lawbreakers willing to hunt
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
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event
that
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animals
are on the verge of extinction. To satisfied
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people
temporary interested dogs
also
become a part of meal in
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some
several country despite the moral aspect.
Moreover
,
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some
unethical person would pay numerous money to have
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rhino&
#039; s horns for decoration though one horn can harm one rhino
badly
. If one hundred
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people
want to have
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rhino&
#039; s horn, one hundred
Possible agreement error. The noun 'rhino' seems to be countable, so consider using: "rhinos".
rhino
will be
Consider using a past participle here: "killed".
kill
meaningless. In consequent, rhinoceros population will be blow out significant while
also
running
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "animals'" or "animal's"?
animals
food chain.

In addition
,
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enviroment
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change
affect
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people
life immediately. We can not
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live
in a friendly world while the diversity of
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animals
reducing, plant is illness
also
cause
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dangerous
for human health.
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anything
we eat have the chance to hurt our strength either occurs rare disease. All of this happen
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because
of human responsibility
as well
as
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government
has not
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punish
them
strictly
. Everything they do claim their benefits
first
and has not put them into trouble
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so
they continue break the
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rule
without hesitate.

In conclusion
, authorities should
seriously
warn citizen what they will lost if natural disease exist. Regulation made to be more considerable to protect
Possible spelling mistake found.
eco-system
from unworthy
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events
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders Support your answer with specific reasons and examples v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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