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Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples? v.2

Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples? v. 2
In the salad days of the millennium, the problem of the surroundings is increasing and has become an alarming issue as our bureaucrats are not implementing any hard case against the offenders. A sea change has been witnessed that no problem of lack of rules and situation before. This issue is made, our life worse. A lion's share of society has favoured it, and the rest of a verse it In this essay, we would elucidate my personal perspective along with opt example. I see eye to eye, with the central idea that our ministry doesn't take any action for those who is responsible for harming the ecology. There are myriads of reason, such as corruption and ineffective state control. The decision regarding the reduced practice of elastic made by our country, but it is not followed because of corruption or illegal activities. Legislation has been passed for saving the surroundings from the hazards with harm us. Thus, they want to degrade the elastic, but no act should be made to punish the people. I would like to quote an epitome that last year, one person who belongs to the politics handling the moulded bottle which is not bio-degradeable and police force watch him, but he did not fine him even at that time there was a case that if someone practice moulded pays the huge amount as a fine. however, sometimes government is not responsible for all that because there are lots of crime which harm the climate like increasing the pollution as the number of vehicles rises. Futhermore, people use more and more land for industry and reduces the land of agriculture, which has a detrimental effect on people and the habitat. Moreover, sometimes code has broken unknowingly rather than knowingly, so state do not charge to poors because it makes their life worse. To recapitulate, after discussing above assertions I would like to infer that both government and individual should go hand in hand in order to curb the menace so there is no need of any decision for those who break the rules. Authority had already lots of projects to hone the economy of the country.
In the salad days of the millennium, the problem of the surroundings is increasing and has become an alarming issue as our bureaucrats are not implementing any
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hard
case against the offenders. A sea
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change
has
been witnessed
that no problem of lack of
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rules
and situation
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before
. This issue
is made
, our life worse. A lion's share of society has
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favoured
it, and the rest of a verse it In this essay, we would elucidate my personal perspective along with opt example.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
eye to eye, with the central
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that our ministry doesn't take any action for those who is responsible for harming the ecology. There are myriads of reason, such as corruption and ineffective state control. The decision regarding the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
practice of elastic made by our country,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is not followed
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because
of corruption or illegal activities. Legislation has
been passed
for saving the surroundings from the hazards with harm us.
Thus
, they want to degrade the elastic,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
no act should
be made
to punish the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. I would like to quote an epitome that last year, one person who belongs to the politics handling the
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moulded
bottle which is not
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bio-degradeable
and police force
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watch
him,
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but
he did not fine him even at that time there was a case that if someone practice
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moulded
pays the huge amount as a fine.

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however
,
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sometimes
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government
is not responsible for all that
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because
there are lots of crime which harm the climate like increasing the pollution as the number of vehicles rises.
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Futhermore
,
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people
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use
more and more land for industry and
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reduces
the land of agriculture, which has a detrimental effect on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and the habitat.
Moreover
,
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sometimes
code has broken
unknowingly
rather
than
knowingly
,
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so
state do not charge to
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poors
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because
it
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makes
their life worse.

To recapitulate, after discussing above assertions I would like to infer that both
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and individual should go
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hand in hand in
order to curb the menace
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
there is no need of any decision for those who break the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
. Authority had already lots of projects to hone the economy of the country.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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