Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree? v.3
Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. v. 3
According to some individuals, only parents should take care of the physical activity of their children and schools should not play a role in it. However, this statement seems to be unjustifiable to me. Because, Activities in school are more interesting compared with ones at home, moreover, a institute can cause to prove children's inner skills in particular sports games.
From one angle, children get easily bored when they play alone or in a small group. The reason is that physical games are run interestingly in an extended organization. If children do not find partners to play with, they may abandon the physical activities, is not any more attractive for them, and try to spend their time in other entertainments such as computer games, which do not require partners, causing children less active. However, in the school, they can have lots of counter partners, and this encourages them to make enthusiasm towards physical activities.
From another perspective, primary academy is considered a fundamental facility for all specialties, so it should have all basic subjects such as even physical training. Because in early age nobody knows who children become in the future. Therefore, they should experiment with themselves in different fields. As an outcome, if they have a talent of any kind of sports games, their supervisor may notify their parents about it, this may lead parents to support their children to be professional in this sport game.
To sum up, some consider that sport activity should be abandoned from school, and give this responsibility to parents. Nevertheless, since children have access to play in a group and be encouraged by this aspect, and the school can bring up plenty of sportsmen, the school ought to have sport lessons as part of the curriculum.
According to
some
individuals,
only
parents
should take care of the
physical
activity
of their
children
and
schools
should not
play
a role in it.
However
, this statement seems to be unjustifiable to me.
Because
,
Activities
in
school
are more interesting compared with ones at home,
moreover
,
a
institute can cause
to prove
children's inner
skills
in particular
sports
games.
From one angle,
children
get
easily
bored when they
play
alone or in a
small
group. The reason is that
physical
games
are run
interestingly
in an extended organization. If
children
do not find partners to
play
with, they may abandon the
physical
activities
, is not
any more
attractive for them, and try to spend their time in other entertainments such as computer games, which do not require partners, causing
children
less active.
However
, in the
school
, they can have lots of counter partners, and this encourages them to
make
enthusiasm towards
physical
activities.
From another perspective, primary academy
is considered
a fundamental facility for all specialties,
so
it should have all basic subjects such as even
physical
training.
Because
in early age nobody knows who
children
become in the future.
Therefore
, they should experiment with themselves in
different
fields. As an outcome, if they have a talent of any kind of
sports
games, their supervisor may notify their
parents
about it, this may lead
parents
to support their
children
to be professional in this
sport
game.
To sum up,
some
consider that
sport
activity
should
be abandoned
from
school
, and give this responsibility to
parents
.
Nevertheless
, since
children
have access to
play
in a group and
be encouraged
by this aspect, and the
school
can bring up
plenty
of sportsmen, the
school
ought to have
sport
lessons as part of the curriculum.
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