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English has become a need of the day and the local language are getting sidelined Give opinion and discuss your view. v.1

English has become a need of the day and the local language are getting sidelined Give opinion and discuss your view. v. 1
English in the current time and era has become a common language of communication across the globe. It has become a pivotal part of education, growth and commercial activities. Over time, it has been given preference over local languages, due to which, there’s a threat to latter becoming obsolete. In my opinion, it is very necessary to learn English, but at the same time, it is crucial to keep the local languages alive. English has, without doubt, become a necessity in current context. This is primarily due to increasing globalization and mobilization, due to which, there has been movement of population across region in search of jobs, education or business. This has, in turn, led to a need of a common language that is understood across regions. English hence, gained momentum as a most frequently and commonly used language. It allows people to learn, communicate and advance in their lives in global scenario. Unfortunately, preference given to the language and associating it with a better lifestyle is threatening the survival of local / regional languages. The basic essence of the language which is a means to communicate, is lost in the whole scenario. This poses a grave threat to local languages of dying out and becoming obsolete. Moreover, the research has proven that bilingual or multilingual kids have better chances of succeeding in their careers due to their adaptability. I, therefore, strongly believe that English along with other regional languages can co-exist and mutually reinforce development. Local languages, in fact should be taught a second language, yet the mandatory subject in the schools. Plays can be organized based on different languages and students be encouraged to read and write articles in different languages. This would not just ensure that the kids become adept in both the languages, but also ensure one language is not looked down upon in comparison to another.
English in the
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time and era has
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a common
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language
of communication across the globe. It has
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become
a pivotal part of education, growth and commercial activities. Over time, it has been
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given
preference over
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local
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languages
,
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due
to which, there’s a threat to latter becoming obsolete. In my opinion, it is
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very
necessary to learn English,
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at the same time, it is crucial to
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keep
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local
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languages
alive.

English has, without doubt,
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become
a necessity in
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current
context. This is
primarily
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due
to increasing globalization and mobilization,
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due
to which, there has been movement of population across region in search of jobs, education or business. This has, in turn, led to a need of a common
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language
that
is understood
across regions. English
hence
, gained momentum as a most
frequently
and
commonly
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used
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language
. It
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allows
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people
to learn, communicate and advance in their
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lives
in global scenario.

Unfortunately, preference
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given
to the
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language
and associating it with a better lifestyle is threatening the survival of
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local
/ regional
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languages
. The basic essence of the
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language
which is a means to communicate,
is lost
in the whole scenario. This poses a grave threat to
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local
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languages
of dying out and becoming obsolete.
Moreover
, the research has proven that bilingual or multilingual kids have better chances of succeeding in their careers
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due
to their adaptability.

I,
therefore
,
strongly
believe that English along with other regional
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languages
can co-exist and
mutually
reinforce development.
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Local
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languages
, in fact should
be taught
a second
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language
,
yet
the mandatory subject in the schools. Plays can
be organized
based on
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different
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languages
and students
be encouraged
to read and write articles in
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different
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languages
. This would not
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ensure that the kids
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become
adept in both the
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languages
,
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but
also
ensure one
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language
is not looked down upon
in comparison
to another.
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IELTS essay English has become a need of the day and the local language are getting sidelined Give opinion and discuss your view. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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