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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. v.4

Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. v. 4
There is a widely held perception in many parts of the world today that the education system remains contentious issues if its an essential need or luxury. To a certain extent, I strongly agree that the fundamental human rights to education should be the same life chance for all whether one is wealthy or not. One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that education ultimately thrives mankind. Education develops an individual’s personality, unlocks full potential, and prepares individuals to participate in society. This is because, education, being the most crucial human rights, is extremely necessary for the exercise of all other human rights. It enlightens people that promote individual freedom and empowerment. Most vital importantly, education is a magical tool by which socially and economically marginalized individuals can lift themselves out of poverty and can act like dignified citizens. Hence, the education system is a silver bullet for combating poverty and access to schooling is not a prerogative of privileged circles of society. It is true that the education price is too prohibitive to achieve a successful life from society. However, I believe that education made liberal in these places have clear advantages. Equality is the core of getting the same quality of education to everyone. Educational institutions like schools and colleges are places where children come together irrespective of wealth and social standards. They wear the same uniform emphasizing equality among everyone. Equal and similar education standards should be made a fundamental human right in society. Education is treated as basic human rights that it should be free for all, at least at the elementary level. It is, in the end, reasonable to conclude that ensuring education for every citizen of a country is a promise and goal for every government. It is beyond debate that education is a fundamental need for each citizen of a country. We do not debate whether food or healthcare is a fundamental need or not. The same way we should never doubt that education is a very basic human need.
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held perception in
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many
parts of the world
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today
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education
system remains contentious issues if its an essential
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need
or luxury. To a certain extent, I
strongly
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agree
that the
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fundamental
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human
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rights
to
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education
should be the same life chance for all whether one is wealthy or not.

One point which I believe to be
absolutely
pivotal is the fact that
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education
ultimately
thrives mankind.
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Education
develops an
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individual’s
personality, unlocks full potential, and prepares
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individuals
to participate in society. This is
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because
,
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education
, being the most crucial
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human
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rights
, is
extremely
necessary for the exercise of all other
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human
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rights
. It enlightens
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people
that promote
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individual
freedom and empowerment. Most vital
importantly
,
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education
is a magical tool by which
socially
and
economically
marginalized
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individuals
can lift themselves out of poverty and can act like dignified citizens.
Hence
, the
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education
system is a silver bullet for combating poverty and access to schooling is not a prerogative of privileged circles of society.

It is true that the
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education
price is too prohibitive to achieve a successful life from society.
However
, I believe that
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education
made liberal in these places have
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clear
advantages. Equality is the core of getting the same quality of
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education
to everyone. Educational institutions like schools and colleges are places where children
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come
together irrespective of wealth and social standards. They wear the same uniform emphasizing equality among everyone. Equal and similar
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education
standards should
be made
a
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fundamental
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human
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right
in society.
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Education
is treated
as basic
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human
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rights
that it should be free for all, at least at the elementary level.

It is, in the
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end
, reasonable
to conclude
that ensuring
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education
for every citizen of a country is a promise and goal for every
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government
. It is beyond debate that
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education
is a
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fundamental
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need
for each citizen of a country. We do not debate whether food or healthcare is a
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fundamental
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need
or not. The same way we should never doubt that
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education
is a
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very
basic
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human
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need
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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