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Education is a critical element of the prosperity of a nation. The more educated people are the more prosperous the country would be. v.1

Education is a critical element of the prosperity of a nation. The more educated people are the more prosperous the country would be. v. 1
Technological advancement and transformation in social stature have revolutionised human life. Has it been for the application of the Internet, smartphones, bleeding-edge technological online applications, every facet of human life has been touched and impacted! These cutting edge transgressions need an educated population to utilise and enhance their lifestyle. Thus, the argument that education is mandatory for a prosperous nation holds ground on below major rationales. To begin with, application of internet and latest communication mediums such as email and social media requires an educated people with understanding to use them. It is not possible for illiterate audiences to procure the profound usage of such devices. For an instance, as per a report from international technological advancement institute of India, smartphones and email communication has not been able to flourish in African nations where literacy level is below 20%. Evidently, it is obligatory for the citizens of a nation to be educated and aptly accept the cutting-edge technological instruments in their life and assist in the development of the nation. In addition, natural resources in a country are limited. Admittedly, it is pivotal for the nation to exhaust them with contemplation. This is possible only when the denizens are adequately educated and informed about it is consequences: if these are not consumed with cogitation. For an instance, a nation will be able to flourish if the people are using private vehicles appropriately and as a result assisting the nation to reduce the national expenses in importing the fuel. Thus, it can be corroborated that education of the citizens is vital. To sum up, it is true that in this world of highly extensive technology and limited fossil resources, it is mandatory for a country to devise an efficacious education system to educate people as the literate population is an imperative constituent for the development of a nation.
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Technological
advancement and transformation in social stature have
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revolutionised
human life. Has it been for the application of the Internet, smartphones, bleeding-edge
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technological
online applications, every facet of human life has
been touched
and impacted! These cutting edge transgressions need an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
educated
population to
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.
utilise
and enhance their lifestyle.
Thus
, the argument that education is mandatory for a prosperous
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nation
holds ground on below major rationales.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, application of internet and latest communication mediums such as email and social media requires an
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educated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
with understanding to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them. It is not possible for illiterate audiences to procure the profound usage of such devices. For an instance, as per a report from international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technological
advancement institute of India, smartphones and email communication has not been able to flourish in African
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nations
where literacy level is below 20%.
Evidently
, it is obligatory for the citizens of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
to be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
educated
and
aptly
accept the cutting-edge
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technological
instruments in their life and assist in the development of the nation.

In addition
, natural resources in a country
are limited
.
Admittedly
, it is pivotal for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
to exhaust them with contemplation. This is possible
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
when the denizens are
adequately
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
educated
and informed about it is consequences: if these are not consumed with cogitation. For an instance, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
will be able to flourish if the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are using private vehicles
appropriately
and
as a result
assisting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the national expenses in importing the fuel.
Thus
, it can
be corroborated
that education of the citizens is vital.

To sum up, it is true that in this world of
highly
extensive technology and limited fossil resources, it is mandatory for a country to devise an efficacious education system to educate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
as the literate population is an imperative constituent for the development of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Education is a critical element of the prosperity of a nation. The more educated people are the more prosperous the country would be. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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