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Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing. To what extent do you agree? Write at least 250 words. v.1

Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing. v. 1
Usage of new technology and new facilities, writing a letter is all most going to get extinct. I strongly agree with this statement. In this essay i would like to express my thoughts with suitable example's. To start with, In olden day's there were no such technology's and people's use to write a letter's to send any kind of message. Well, it was a period of time where it keeps the people's anticipated and eager for the letters and their reply, but it did take a long time to receive the letter and reply back which was one of the key factors for the anticipation. Some also believe as a mark of personal touch as even though the receiver of the letter is far away from the sender they could feel the emotion's and what the person feel while writing a letter. Where as now in the modern period sign writing is seen very rarely, one could find such documents only if it is of uttermost importance, for instance, letter from the court or any letter from the government authorities. Due to developed facilities such as internet made it more convenient to send message or email for example, one can send a message from one part of the planet to another part of our planet without any issue with ease and we can get reply back without any waiting time. Which help to keep in contact with our loved one's who are far away from them on applications such as Whatsapp, Facebook and Skype. Not only internet plays a major role in our present generations, but also mobile phones play an important role as in back old days, everyone didn't have phones and there was no wide spread of telecommunication but with new development it makes easy to call anyone with just one click of a button. To summarize, I strongly believe that letter writing ability is disappearing due to new machinery's which make it easy to communicate, then letter writing and waiting for their reply back, but we shouldn't neglect that letter writing can be an art and we shouldn't completely forget it as with new automation message one can't express persons emotions as there is no personal touch to it, where as in handwritten letters do have and it values more then tech letters.
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technology and
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new
facilities,
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writing
a
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letter
is all most going to
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get
extinct. I
strongly
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agree
with this statement. In this essay
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i
would like to express my thoughts with suitable example's.

To
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with, In olden day's there were no such technology's and
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people
's
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use to
write a letter's to
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send
any kind of
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message
. Well, it was a period of
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time where
it
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keeps
the
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people
's anticipated and eager for the
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letters
and their
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reply
,
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but
it did take a long time to receive the
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letter
and
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reply
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back
which was one of the key factors for the anticipation.
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Some
also
believe as a mark of personal touch as
even though
the receiver of the
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letter
is far away from the sender they could feel the emotion's and what the person feel while
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writing
a letter.

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Where as
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now
in the modern period
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sign
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writing
is
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seen
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very
rarely, one could find such documents
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only
if it is of uttermost importance,
for instance
,
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letter
from the court or any
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letter
from the
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government
authorities. Due to developed facilities such as internet made it more convenient to
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send
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message
or email
for example
, one can
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send
a
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message
from one part of the planet to another part of our planet without any issue with
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ease and
we can
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get
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reply
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back
without any waiting time. Which
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help
to
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keep
in contact with our
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loved
one's who are far away from them on applications such as
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Whatsapp
, Facebook and Skype. Not
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only
internet plays a major role in our present generations,
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but
also
mobile phones play an
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important
role as in
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back
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old
days, everyone didn't have phones and there was no wide spread of telecommunication
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but
with
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new
development it
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makes
easy to call anyone with
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just
one click of a button.

To summarize
, I
strongly
believe that
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letter
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writing
ability is disappearing due to
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new
machinery's which
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make
it easy to communicate, then
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letter
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writing
and waiting for their
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reply
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back
,
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but
we shouldn't neglect that
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letter
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writing
can be an
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art and
we shouldn't completely forget it as with
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new
automation
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message
one can't express persons emotions as there is no personal touch to it,
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where as
in handwritten
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letters
do have and it values more
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then
tech
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letters
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes
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IELTS essay Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
386 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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