The rate at which large grocery stores are increasing in some part of the world is incomparable with local stores. I completely agree that this will make difficult for local vendors to exist. This essay will discuss how advancement in super-marts are affecting native merchant.
Firstly, in supermarkets we get more choices compared to local shops. We can compare and buy different products available which proves to be beneficial to buyers as they will get to choose from a variety of options. For example, a general store will have a diverse range of shampoos available and people can pick according to their needs and not based on availability. Secondly, this kind of general-store provides special services like a free home delivery. This will help customer to not to worry about lifting heavy shopping bags.
While in the case of local shops, consumer has very limited choice and the quality of items will not be up to the mark, as the shop-keeper will not be able to import things from a distant vendor. Also, customers will not be attracted to local shops due to absence of attractive offers or services as a small businessperson cannot afford to do so. For instance, small merchants will not be able to provide discounts during holiday seasons as during that time only they will get the chance to make a profit.
In conclusion, the rise in grocery chain-stores are increasing and they are attracting a good amount of customers, which is making impossible for local businesses to bid for. Therefore, it is seen that native shopkeepers will be facing challenges in their survival.
The rate at which large grocery stores are increasing in
some
part of the world is incomparable with
local
stores. I completely
agree
that this will
make
difficult for
local
vendors to exist. This essay will discuss how advancement in super-marts are affecting native merchant.
Firstly
, in supermarkets we
get
more choices compared to
local
shops. We can compare and
buy
different
products available which proves to be beneficial to buyers as they will
get
to choose from a variety of options.
For example
, a general store will have a diverse range of shampoos available and
people
can pick according to their needs and not based on availability.
Secondly
, this kind of general-store provides special services like a free home delivery. This will
help
customer
to not to
worry about lifting heavy shopping bags.
While in the case of
local
shops, consumer has
very
limited choice and the quality of items will not be up to the mark, as the shop-keeper will not be able to import things from a distant vendor.
Also
, customers will not
be attracted
to
local
shops due to absence of attractive offers or services as a
small
businessperson cannot afford to do
so
.
For instance
,
small
merchants will not be able to provide discounts during holiday seasons as during that time
only
they will
get
the chance to
make
a profit.
In conclusion
, the rise in grocery chain-stores are
increasing and
they are attracting a
good
amount of customers, which is making impossible for
local
businesses to bid for.
Therefore
, it is
seen
that native shopkeepers will be facing challenges in their survival.
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