Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. v. 4
It is argued by some that with the development of the internet, public libraries are not required any longer. I totally agree with this statement. Also, I would opine that the availability of information on online websites and access to ebooks has eliminated the need to have public libraries. The primary reason why the internet is preferred to libraries is the huge amount of information available online. This is to say that almost everyone around the world can access any type of data / information and acquire knowledge. Many educational websites and blogs are available on the internet, and the information is related to not only subjects like maths, science, history, and computer programming languages but also other major courses. For example, research by The Guardian revealed that 92% of computer science students at the University of Texas used an online site “Udemy” to learn coding languages like Java and Python language. The availability of ebooks on the internet and websites is eliminating the need for libraries. This is because when ebooks were not available in the past, many people used to visit libraries to gather and read information related to research, assignment, and projects, but ebooks have made it more convenient and easy for people to complete their research projects from the comfort of their homes without visiting the library. For instance, a survey conducted by the New York Times revealed that more than 97% of master’s students in the University of Pennsylvania used ebooks to complete their thesis projects instead of going to the library. In conclusion, it seems to me that the advancement of the internet eliminated the need for libraries; people can acquire any kind of information to complete their research assignments and projects through educational websites and ebooks. It is highly recommended that public libraries are much of importance.
It
is argued
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
that with the development of the internet, public libraries are not required any longer. I
totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this statement.
Also
, I would opine that the availability of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on online websites and access to
Possible spelling mistake found.
ebooks
has eliminated the need to have public libraries.

The primary reason why the internet
is preferred
to libraries is the huge amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
available online. This is to say that almost everyone around the world can access any type of data /
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
and acquire knowledge.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
educational websites and blogs are available on the internet, and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
is related
to not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
subjects like
Possible spelling mistake. 'maths' is British English.
maths
, science, history, and computer programming languages
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
other major courses.
For example
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
by The Guardian revealed that 92% of computer science students at the University of Texas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
an online site “Udemy” to learn
If 'learn' is used as a verb, it usually requires the infinitive: "to code".
coding
languages like Java and Python language.

The availability of
Possible spelling mistake found.
ebooks
on the internet and websites is eliminating the need for libraries. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
when
Possible spelling mistake found.
ebooks
were not available in the past,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to visit libraries to gather and read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
related to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
, assignment, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
Possible spelling mistake found.
ebooks
have made it more convenient and easy for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to complete their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
from the comfort of their homes without visiting the library.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the New York Times revealed that more than 97% of master’s students in the University of Pennsylvania
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
Possible spelling mistake found.
ebooks
to complete their thesis
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
instead
of going to the library.

In conclusion
, it seems to me that the advancement of the internet eliminated the need for libraries;
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can acquire any kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
to complete their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
assignments and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
through educational websites and
Possible spelling mistake found.
ebooks
. It is
highly
recommended that public libraries are much of importance.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
To have another language is to possess a second soul.
Charlemagne

IELTS essay Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts