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Does personality describe the person? To what extent do you agree? v.1

Does personality describe the person? v. 1
The nature of the person easily describe how the human is going to react to a particular scenario. Human who is happy going will spread joy everywhere they go on the other side who are self centred just don't even like to talk with anyone. This essay will discuss why one's personality plays a vital role in describing them. To embark on, some people are introverts and they like to be aloof and little do they socialize. For example, if you ask inward looking human for short trip it's been very hard for them to say yes and then pretend that they are very social people. Therefore, people inward nature speaks a lot about whether what will their reaction to a particular situation or they are happy with these socializing. At last, they are considered to be self obsessed people. On the other side, people with extrovert nature are easy to mingle with and they are always happy even situation goes bad. For instance, a study shows that people who are more outward looking they never have to face any problem and if the problem, it will not make them just think about a situation but finding the solution is the key and which make them easy going with everyone. Thus, the people of this humour are more into people than aloof. They just bring smiles into everyone's face in any scenario which is hardly to get one if a person is dealing with the problem. There are also some altruistic people who just like to help someone without any motive, which is sometime does not like by their families as they are someone who can easily get hurt by any vitriol. Thus these kind of person are very helpful by type. In a nutshell, personality describes a lot about character. By Just describing pupil's character we can know if they are self centred, aloof, happy going or a selfless character.
The nature of the person
easily
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describe
how the human is going to react to a particular scenario. Human
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who
is
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happy
going will spread joy everywhere they go on the other side
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who
are
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self centred
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just
don't even like to talk with anyone. This essay will discuss why one's personality plays a vital role in describing them.

To embark on,
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some
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people
are
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introverts and
they like to be aloof and
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little
do they socialize.
For example
, if you ask inward looking human for short trip it's been
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very
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hard
for them to say yes and then pretend that they are
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very
social
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people
.
Therefore
,
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people
inward nature speaks a lot about whether what will their reaction to a particular
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situation or
they are
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happy
with these socializing. At last, they
are considered
to be self obsessed
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people
.

On the other side,
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people
with extrovert nature are easy to mingle
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with and
they are always
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happy
even situation goes
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bad
.
For instance
, a study
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shows
that
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people
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who
are more outward looking they never
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have to
face any problem and if the problem, it will not
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make
them
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just
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think
about a situation
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but
finding the solution is the key and which
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make
them easy going with everyone.
Thus
, the
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people
of this
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humour
are more into
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people
than aloof. They
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just
bring smiles into everyone's face in any scenario which is hardly to
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get
one if a person is dealing with the problem.

There are
also
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some
altruistic
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people
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who
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just
like to
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help
someone without any motive, which is sometime does not like by their families as they are someone
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who
can
easily
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get
hurt by any vitriol.
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Thus
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these kind
of person are
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very
helpful by type.

In a nutshell, personality
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describes
a lot about character. By
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Just
describing pupil's character we can know if they are
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self centred
, aloof,
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happy
going or a selfless character.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Does personality describe the person? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
321 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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