Nowadays, a low physical activity level is a common problem all over the world; it leads to different diseases, and doctors claim that such issues should be resolved in order to have a healthy society. Mostly, people do not spend time actively because there are not enough areas in big cities for running or walking; therefore, people prefer to spend their leisure time at home. To solve this issue, the government should promote a healthy lifestyle and make it appealing to their citizens.
Because of long commuting times, people are less motivated to spend time exercising. For the most part, they come home after work and have no reasons to go somewhere from their houses; it is more comfortable to stay at home rather than spend about two hours driving to the nearest gym or park if they want to run. Cities are not convenient for an active lifestyle, and usually city builders do not plan any infrastructure for sport activities. It leads to a low activity level among citizens and a growing number of diseases connected to it.
As people are not proactive, the government should promote an active lifestyle among them. There are several ways how to do that, but the most simple is to create more recreational areas and sports facilities. When people have alternatives on how to spend their time, they choose the healthiest one; therefore, cities that have enough public places to play sport or walk show lower rates of health issues caused by a low physical activity. For example, the number of people exercising and playing sports in Dnipro has increased significantly when local authorities built several sport areas in the city. It shows a connection between a number of sports facilities available and people’s activity.
To sum up, the world’s population is under the threat of diseases caused by a low physical activity level. Local authorities should address this issue and create more recreational places to promote exercising and sports.
Nowadays, a
low
physical
activity
level is a common problem all over the world; it leads to
different
diseases, and doctors claim that such
issues
should
be resolved
in order to have a healthy society.
Mostly
,
people
do not
spend
time
actively
because
there are not
enough
areas in
big
cities
for running or walking;
therefore
,
people
prefer to
spend
their leisure
time
at home. To solve this
issue
, the
government
should promote a healthy lifestyle and
make
it appealing to their citizens.
Because
of long commuting
times
,
people
are less motivated to
spend
time
exercising.
For the most part
, they
come
home after work and have no reasons to go somewhere from their
houses
; it is more comfortable to stay at home
rather
than
spend
about two hours driving to the nearest gym or park if they want to run.
Cities
are not convenient for an active lifestyle, and
usually
city builders do not plan any infrastructure for
sport
activities
. It leads to a
low
activity
level among citizens and a growing number of diseases connected to it.
As
people
are not proactive, the
government
should promote an active lifestyle among them. There are several ways how to do that,
but
the most simple
is to create more recreational areas and
sports
facilities. When
people
have alternatives on how to
spend
their
time
, they choose the healthiest one;
therefore
,
cities
that have
enough
public places to play
sport
or walk
show
lower rates of health
issues
caused by a
low
physical
activity
.
For example
, the number of
people
exercising and playing
sports
in Dnipro has increased
significantly
when local authorities built several
sport
areas in the city. It
shows
a
connection between
a number of
sports
facilities available and
people’s
activity.
To sum up, the world’s population is under the threat of diseases caused by a
low
physical
activity
level. Local authorities should address this
issue
and create more recreational places to promote exercising and
sports
.
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