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Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information? v.13

Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information? v. 13
The developments in computers and the internet have created an impeccable impact on electronic content people produce and consume. The interesting question to address is the capability of digital content to replace the physical books. I strongly believe that technology advancements in web and computers have good chances of replacing written text as the primary source of knowledge leading to better individual and social benefits. Firstly, accessibility to knowledge is the main advantage of digital content. For example, any challenged individual has access to electronic content easily in the form of the digital music player like iPod listening to podcasts. In addition, there has been a recent development in the mobile phones with multiple language supports that in combination with the social networking sites like Facebook facilitates the generation of online content in their native languages. Language developments have improved since the invention of speech to text converter software that converts the person's voice into text. Additionally, several people have taken blogging as a hobby that generates a huge amount of electronic content for others to consume. Secondly, there has been a change in the teaching methodology giving more importance to the electronic assignments and online lectures. During olden days, students have to attend classroom lectures to understand the subject area but now several university lectures are given online and available to students throughout the day. Buying a physical story book or education related books are becoming outdated, as everyone prefers to buy an electronic version of the book and load it on their e-book readers or tablet computers. In conclusion, based on the individual and social benefits created by the digital content and internet, I strongly believe that electronic content with World Wide Web will replace physical books as the primary source of knowledge.
The developments in computers and the internet have created an impeccable impact on
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electronic
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content
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people
produce and consume. The interesting question to address is the capability of digital
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content
to replace the physical
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books
. I
strongly
believe that technology advancements in web and computers have
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good
chances of replacing written text as the primary source of knowledge leading to better individual and social benefits.

Firstly
, accessibility to knowledge is the main advantage of digital
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content
.
For example
, any challenged individual has access to
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electronic
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content
easily
in the form of the digital music player like iPod listening to podcasts.
In addition
, there has been a recent development in the mobile phones with multiple language supports that in combination with the social networking sites like Facebook facilitates the generation of online
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content
in their native languages. Language developments have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
since the invention of speech to text converter software that converts the person's voice into text.
Additionally
, several
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have taken blogging as a hobby that generates a huge amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
content
for others to consume.

Secondly
, there has been a
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change
in the teaching methodology giving more importance to the
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electronic
assignments and online lectures. During olden days, students
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have to
attend classroom lectures to understand the subject area
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but
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now
several university lectures are
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given
online and available to students throughout the day. Buying a physical story
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book
or education related
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books
are becoming outdated, as everyone prefers to
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buy
an
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electronic
version of the
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book
and load it on their e-book readers or tablet computers.

In conclusion
, based on the individual and social benefits created by the digital
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content
and internet, I
strongly
believe that
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electronic
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content
with World Wide Web will replace physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
as the primary source of knowledge.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information? v. 13

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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