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Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic v.2

Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic v. 2
Everyone wants to do well in the life and succeed in respective field to get fame and of course money. Some people believe that person must have some ambition in life in order to get success. On the other hand, people believe that being too much ambitious creates so many problems in life. In my view, ambition is positive characteristic and every successful people possess this quality. People who mark ambition as negative quality have some valid reasons. Firstly, people set the ambitions unrealistically sometimes and undergo immense pressure for achieving those. Most of time, unrealistic expectations are not met and people fail to achieve the set targets. For example, my nephew wanted to be singer but did not have good voice so failed miserably and created dis-satisfaction in whole family. Secondly, it is generally seen that even realistic ambitions creates so much stress in life that people sometime people not able to cope it and falls in depression. However, successful people embrace this characteristic and love to change the set ambitions. It is very common saying that without ambition one can’t get anywhere in life and this seems to be true in almost all cases. Individuals believe that ambition creates the goals which keep the one focused and determined. For instance, famous tennis player Roger Federer had ambitions to be the no-1 tennis player and it motivated him to be physically fit and create techniques in short span of time to defeat others in tournament. Besides this, dream also works as a fuel which drives the person towards the goal and person never feel bored or irritate even if there are some hindrances appear. To conclude, without goal person may waste the energy and eventually reached nowhere. Therefore, it is always good to have ambitions in life for become successful and I consider this as positive traits.
Everyone wants to do well in the
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life
and succeed in respective field to
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get
fame and
of course
money.
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Some
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people
believe that
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person
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must
have
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some
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ambition
in
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life
in order to
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get
success.
On the other hand
,
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people
believe that being too much ambitious
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creates
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so
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many
problems in
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life
. In my view,
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ambition
is
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positive
characteristic and every successful
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people
possess this quality.

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People
who mark
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ambition
as
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negative
quality have
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some
valid reasons.
Firstly
,
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people
set the
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ambitions
unrealistically
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sometimes
and undergo immense pressure for achieving those.
Consider using "Most time" or "Most of the time".
Most of time
, unrealistic expectations are not met and
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people
fail to achieve the set targets.
For example
, my nephew wanted to be singer
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but
did not have
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good
voice
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so
failed
miserably
and created dis-satisfaction in whole family.
Secondly
, it is
generally
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seen
that even realistic
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ambitions
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creates
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so
much
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stress
in
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life
that
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people
sometime
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people
not able to cope it and falls in depression.

However
, successful
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people
embrace this characteristic and
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love
to
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change
the set
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ambitions
. It is
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very
common saying that without
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ambition
one can’t
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get
anywhere in
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life
and this seems to be true in almost all cases. Individuals believe that
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ambition
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creates
the goals which
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keep
the one focused and determined.
For instance
,
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famous
tennis player Roger Federer had
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ambitions
to be the no-1 tennis player and it motivated him to be
physically
fit and
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create
techniques in short span of time to defeat others in tournament.
Besides
this, dream
also
works as a fuel which drives the
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person
towards the goal and
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person
never feel bored or irritate even if there are
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some
hindrances appear.

To conclude
, without goal
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person
may waste the energy and
eventually
reached nowhere.
Therefore
, it is always
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good
to have
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ambitions
in
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life
for become successful and I consider this as
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positive
traits.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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