No one would argue that youth is a tremendously vital period of every individual’s life. It is a step towards either a bright future or disappointing one. Although it is a common belief among some people that regulations expected in whole societies to be pursued by young individuals are too strict, I personally believe otherwise.
First reason to elaborate this statement is the increase in crime rate among youngsters. Despite the existence of all these strict rules, nowadays the world is experiencing an exponential growth in street crimes such as dealing drugs as well as robbery which is often done by young people. This shows that not only social obligations and rules are not strict enough, they have lots of deficiencies.
Secondly, regulations which are expected to be followed in every society, emerge out of the particular demands and conditions in that society. When we realize that every societal norm and its following rules are compatible with the unique features of that community, then the concept of strict rules would become irrelevant. In my adolescence, for instance, my parents ground some harsh limitations and obligations regarding my studies and education, according to excessive growth of population in my generation which had led to shortage of the available places in governmental Universities’ admissions. Therefore, just like those rules on that period of time in my life, other expectations of parents and societies from teenagers are proportional to a particular challenge in that society.
Taken together, I subscribe to the idea that limitations expected from young people to follow are appropriate with their age and conditions in which they are living in, and will bring them prosperity in their future.
No one would argue that youth is a
tremendously
vital period of every individual’s life. It is a step towards either a bright future or disappointing one. Although it is a common belief among
some
people
that regulations
expected
in whole
societies
to
be pursued
by young individuals are too
strict
, I
personally
believe
otherwise
.
First
reason to elaborate this statement is the increase in crime rate among youngsters. Despite the existence of all these
strict
rules
, nowadays the world is experiencing an exponential growth in street crimes such as dealing drugs
as well
as robbery which is
often
done by young
people
. This
shows
that not
only
social obligations and
rules
are not
strict
enough
, they have lots of deficiencies.
Secondly
, regulations which are
expected
to
be followed
in every
society
, emerge out of the particular demands and conditions in that
society
. When we realize that every societal norm and its following
rules
are compatible with the unique features of that community, then the concept of
strict
rules
would become irrelevant. In my adolescence,
for instance
, my parents ground
some
harsh limitations and obligations regarding my studies and education, according to excessive growth of population in my generation which had led to shortage of the available places in governmental Universities’ admissions.
Therefore
,
just
like those
rules
on that period of time in my life, other expectations of parents and
societies
from
teenagers
are proportional to a particular challenge in that society.
Taken together, I subscribe to the
idea
that limitations
expected
from young
people
to follow are appropriate with their age and conditions in which they are living in, and will bring them prosperity in their future.
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