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Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters, e-mails or telephone callsUse specific reasons and details to support your answer v.30

Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters, e-mails or telephone callsUse specific reasons and details to support your answer v. 30
Nowadays, thanks to the development of modern technology, people have used many kinds of communication as an alternative to face-to-face communication. Nevertheless, I wholeheartedly believe that face to face communication is still the most effective way to have a conversation with other people. First and foremost, there is no denying that this type of communication is capable of creating more motivations. For example, whenever you congratulate or thank somebody, you had better express your feelings directly by means of smiling at them, showing your admiration or your gratitude in person for their achievements. Furthermore, not only does it can help people have more productive confabulation, it also diminishes the risks of misunderstanding. Rather than sending an email or letter which can be misunderstood, misread or perceived by another person, individuals will have more opportunities to explain and convey their messages personally. Therefore, face to face communication can minimize the venture of miscommunication compared to other types. Last but not least, it is much better to utilize face-to-face communication to build a close bond among many people. Having an unmediated meeting together can help people to have more chances to build a rapport which is never felt through emails, letter, and social media. This genre of communicating can make it easier for everyone to build camaraderie, credibility and trust in the relationship and also generate a collaborative environment, inspire a positive emotional interaction between two people. To sum up, I strongly claim that everyone should have face to face communication to get an efficacious discussion.
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as an alternative to face-to-face
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, I
wholeheartedly
believe that
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face
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face
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communication
is
still
the most effective way to have a conversation with other
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people
.

First
and foremost, there is no denying that this type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is capable of creating more motivations.
For example
, whenever you congratulate or thank somebody, you had better express your feelings
directly
by means of smiling at them, showing your admiration or your gratitude in person for their achievements.

Furthermore
, not
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only
does it can
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help
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people
have more productive confabulation, it
also
diminishes the
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risks
of misunderstanding.
Rather
than sending an email or letter which can be misunderstood, misread or perceived by another person, individuals will have more opportunities to
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explain
and convey their messages
personally
.
Therefore
,
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face
to
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face
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communication
can minimize the venture of miscommunication compared to other types.

Last
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but
not least, it is much better to utilize face-to-face
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communication
to build a close bond among
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many
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people
. Having an unmediated meeting together can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to have more chances to build a rapport which is never felt through emails, letter, and social media. This genre of communicating can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it easier for everyone to build camaraderie, credibility and trust in the relationship and
also
generate a collaborative environment, inspire a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
emotional interaction between two
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people
.

To sum up, I
strongly
claim that everyone should have
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face
to
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face
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communication
to
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get
an efficacious discussion.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters, e-mails or telephone callsUse specific reasons and details to support your answer v. 30

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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