Nowadays, traffic accidents are one of the most challenging problems in many parts of the world. It is often claimed that the main cause of this issue is the sharp increase in the number of vehicles especially motorbikes. Nevertheless, I wholeheartedly believe that people’s fault plays an integral part in the significant rise in traffic accidents.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that the incremental accidents that caused death are because of negative behaviors of many drivers who are unconscious of following traffic rules and do some in-disciplined act before or when they drive. For instance, some people have drunk alcohol at an unaccepted volume. In addition, over speeding is also one of the main causes of this serious problem. A sharp increase in speed multiplies the risk of accidents and severe injury during traffic accidents. As a consequence, it is obviously proved that there is a drastic rise in the number of traffic accidents.
Furthermore, everyone agree that it is the responsibility of the government authorities to advance the transport systems which have been alarmingly damaged somewhere. Unsafe road environment refer to external factors uncontrollable by the drivers such as visibility impairment by darkness, slippery surface, insufficient safety facilities, inadequately repaired vehicles, pedestrians or other vehicles that suddenly get in the way. Therefore, a high number of fatal accidents have been due to the terrible conditions of the facilities.
To sum up, I strongly believe that not only is it essential for everyone to gain understanding about traffic accidents to deal with some unavoidable hardships but it is also crucial to the government to make a progress to enhance the transport system.
Nowadays,
traffic
accidents
are one of the most challenging problems in
many
parts of the world. It is
often
claimed that the main cause of this issue is the sharp increase in the number of vehicles
especially
motorbikes.
Nevertheless
, I
wholeheartedly
believe that
people
’s fault plays an integral part in the significant rise in
traffic
accidents.
First
and foremost, it is undeniable that the incremental
accidents
that caused death are
because
of
negative
behaviors of
many
drivers who are unconscious of following
traffic
rules
and do
some
in-disciplined act
before
or when they drive.
For instance
,
some
people
have drunk alcohol at an unaccepted volume.
In addition
, over speeding is
also
one of the main causes of this serious problem. A sharp increase in speed multiplies the
risk
of
accidents
and severe injury during
traffic
accidents
. As a consequence, it is
obviously
proved that there is a drastic rise in the number of
traffic
accidents.
Furthermore
, everyone
agree
that it is the responsibility of the
government
authorities to advance the transport systems which have been
alarmingly
damaged somewhere. Unsafe road environment refer to external factors uncontrollable by the drivers such as visibility impairment by darkness, slippery surface, insufficient safety facilities,
inadequately
repaired vehicles, pedestrians or other vehicles that
suddenly
get
in the way.
Therefore
, a high number of fatal
accidents
have been due to the terrible conditions of the facilities.
To sum up, I
strongly
believe that not
only
is it essential for everyone to gain understanding about
traffic
accidents
to deal with
some
unavoidable hardships
but
it is
also
crucial to the
government
to
make
a progress to enhance the transport system.
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