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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face Communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.378

Face-to-face Communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 378
Life today has become so complex that examinations pay an important part in someone’s educational career. Some statements say that the need to prepare for tests and examinations is a restriction on teachers and Also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. I entirely agree with This statement. Albeit, examinations aim is to determinate the ability of students, recent studies found that can be a source of stress and pressure not only for students but also for teachers. Pressure might result in disinterest for studies, create fear, which in turn leads to a lack of trust in teachers. Under these circumstances, teachers must spend all their time on classes to prepare for exams, as a result, they are unable to give practical information to students and support individuals with their needs. Another point to consider is that excessive examination can culminate in the breaking of companionship. The spirit of competition, sometimes can go too far and create tension between peers, like ruined friendships or bullying issues. Therefore, their self-esteem can drop and induce suicidal tendency. As an illustration, the amount of stress placed on students to pass the exams is not healthy. It can cause health problems as; headaches, nausea and vomiting, or even worse diseases as anorexia and bulimia. This is notably to teenagers, when removes the natural joy and life become overwhelming. To summarise, even though, some tests will always be required at schools, I strongly believe that the current emphasis on examination is unnecessary. As a solution, it shouldn’t be more than 5 mandatory subjects in the curriculum, so that students can prepare actively for exams and give the best in front of the teachers.
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statements say that the need to prepare for
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is a restriction on
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exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. I
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This statement. Albeit,
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examinations
aim is to determinate the ability of
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students
, recent studies found that can be a source of
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stress
and pressure not
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only
for
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students
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also
for
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teachers
. Pressure might result in disinterest for studies, create fear, which in turn leads to a lack of trust in
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teachers
.
Under these circumstances
,
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must
spend all their time on classes to prepare for exams,
as a result
, they are unable to give practical information to
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students
and support individuals with their needs. Another point to consider is that excessive
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examination
can culminate in the breaking of companionship. The spirit of competition,
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sometimes
can go too far and create tension between peers, like ruined friendships or bullying issues.

Therefore
, their self-esteem can drop and induce suicidal tendency. As an illustration, the amount of
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stress
placed on
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students
to pass the exams is not healthy. It can cause health problems as; headaches, nausea and vomiting, or even worse diseases as anorexia and bulimia.

This is
notably
to
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teenagers
, when removes the natural joy and life become overwhelming. To
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summarise
,
even though
,
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some
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tests
will always
be required
at schools, I
strongly
believe that the
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current
emphasis on
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examination
is unnecessary. As a solution, it shouldn’t be more than 5 mandatory subjects in the curriculum,
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so
that
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students
can prepare
actively
for exams and give the best in front of the
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teachers
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Face-to-face Communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 378

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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