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Do you agree or disagree with the statement "Should college be free for everyone"? Give reasons and examples to support your answers. v.2

"Should college be free for everyone"? Give reasons and examples to support your answers. v. 2
Education is the most essential part of anybody' s life. It imbibes good culture, value, and knowledge among people. To impart knowledge we definitely require resources, therefore cost is always a necessity. But certain sections of society can not afford to study. Therefore, I am in two minds about the statement that should education be free for everyone. It deserves an open mind and a balanced exploration of the potential benefits, drawbacks, and alternatives. The benefits of having a free education is that firstly, students would be able to focus more on their studies rather than worrying about how to scrape together enough funds for each upcoming school term. As a result, more of them might graduate on time, ready to take on important jobs in their communities. Secondly, people would have more freedom to contribute their talents, try new ideas, and pursue the lives they want if they didn' t have to start off in debt or stay stuck in a low-wage job. That could lead to happier people. And happier people could lead to a happier, more prosperous nation as a whole. With benefits come drawback too like with more people choosing to attend public colleges because of their tuition-free status, many schools might have to create wait lists or expand the ones they already have. State budgets could become strained, which might lead to cuts and decreased access to the programs that students want to take. Many students would still have to borrow money for their living expenses as well as for books and supplies. So they wouldn' t get to leave school completely debt-free. Students might take their college education less seriously if they don' t have to pay for it. So graduation numbers might drop, or the people who do graduate might not be as well prepared for the workforce. Students may not learn to become as financially literate or independent as they should be, choosing instead to stay dependent on government programs whenever possible. If a lot more people are able to earn college degrees, then the value of those degrees could decrease. And that could lead to a rising number of workers who are underemployed based on their qualifications. Alternatives to best education can be investing in a better system of youth-development and community-development programs. Discouraging the distribution of merit-based financial aid to wealthy students and using that money to provide more opportunities for poor and middle-class students instead. Establishing better incentives for employers to provide more extensive on-the-job training rather than depending on the higher education system to supply fully qualified workers. Therefore, in my opinion, education should be considered as a whole system with keeping all implications at mind wherein cost is involved.
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Education
is the most essential part of
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anybody&
#039; s life. It imbibes
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good
culture, value, and knowledge among
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people
. To impart knowledge we definitely require resources,
therefore
cost is always a necessity.
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But
certain sections of society can not afford to study.
Therefore
, I am in two minds about the statement that should
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education
be free for everyone. It deserves an open mind and a balanced exploration of the potential benefits, drawbacks, and alternatives.

The benefits of having a free
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education
is that
firstly
,
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students
would be able to focus more on their studies
rather
than worrying about how to scrape together
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enough
funds for each upcoming school term.
As a result
, more of them
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might
graduate on time, ready to take on
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important
jobs in their communities.
Secondly
,
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people
would have more freedom to contribute their talents, try new
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ideas
, and pursue the
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lives
they want if they
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didn&
#039; t
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have to
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start
off in debt or stay stuck in a low-wage job. That could
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lead
to happier
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people
. And happier
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people
could
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lead
to a happier, more prosperous nation as a whole.

With benefits
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come
drawback too like with more
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people
choosing to attend public colleges
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because
of their tuition-free status,
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many
schools
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might
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have to
create wait lists or expand the ones they already have. State budgets could become strained, which
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might
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lead
to
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cuts
and decreased access to the programs that
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students
want to take.
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Many
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students
would
still
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have to
borrow money for their living expenses
as well
as for books and supplies.
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So
they
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wouldn&
#039; t
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get
to
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leave
school completely debt-free.
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Students
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might
take their college
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education
less
seriously
if they
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don&
#039; t
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have to
pay for it.
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So
graduation numbers
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might
drop, or the
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people
who do graduate
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might
not be as
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well prepared
for the workforce.
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Students
may not learn to become as
financially
literate or independent as they should be, choosing
instead
to stay dependent on
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government
programs whenever possible. If a lot more
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people
are able to earn college degrees, then the value of those degrees could decrease. And that could
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lead
to a rising number of workers who
are underemployed
based on their qualifications.

Alternatives
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the best".
to best
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education
can be investing in a better system of youth-development and community-development programs. Discouraging the distribution of merit-based financial aid to wealthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and using that money to provide more opportunities for poor and middle-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
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students
instead
. Establishing better incentives for employers to provide more extensive on-the-job training
rather
than depending on the higher
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education
system to supply
fully
qualified workers.

Therefore
, in my opinion,
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education
should
be considered
as a whole system with keeping all implications at mind wherein cost
is involved
.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay "Should college be free for everyone"? Give reasons and examples to support your answers. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
452 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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