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Do you agree or disagree with the statement "Should college be free for everyone"? Give reasons and examples to support your answers. v.1

"Should college be free for everyone"? Give reasons and examples to support your answers. v. 1
Nowadays, the government of some capital cities in the world initiates the cycling to work movement. To support this program, some nations allocate their spending on building up the cycling facilities so that citizens can go cycling conveniently. It is believed that making cycling a lifestyle is the best course of action to solve the traffic jam problem. This essay will explain why this thought is true and give other reasons related to it. Some capitals in Europe continents, namely Amsterdam and London, focus on building the cycling track infrastructure to encourage citizens do cycling conveniently instead of driving to anywhere. The more people choosing this way, the less cars on the road. Besides solving the traffic deadlock problem, this method also reduces the air pollution and also increases people’s life expectancy. The government can spend less on providing health insurances for the citizens, which is a good sign. Another way is increasing the car owning tax and the petrol price. However, this idea will not work unless the city has already built the proper facilities for people to use an alternative transport, for instance building the public transport and cycling track facilities. However, investing in building the public transport costs more than cycling track. This makes it the most effective way so far. In conclusion, there are several ways for the council to solve the traffic deadlock problem especially in big cities. However, I am certain that building the cycling infrastructure is an initial course of action for citizens to be able to use bicycles as an alternative vehicle.
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government
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capital cities in the world initiates the
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cycling
to work movement. To support this program,
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some
nations allocate their spending on
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building
up the
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cycling
facilities
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so
that
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citizens
can go
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cycling
conveniently
. It
is believed
that making
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cycling
a lifestyle is the best course of action to solve the traffic jam problem. This essay will
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explain
why this
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thought
is true and give other reasons related to it.

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Some
capitals in Europe continents,
namely
Amsterdam and London, focus on
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building
the
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cycling
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track
infrastructure to encourage
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citizens
do
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cycling
conveniently
instead
of driving to anywhere. The more
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people
choosing this way, the
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less
cars on the road.
Besides
solving the traffic deadlock problem, this method
also
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reduces
the air pollution and
also
increases
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people
’s life expectancy. The
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government
can spend less on providing health insurances for the
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citizens
, which is a
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good
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sign
.

Another way is increasing the car owning tax and the petrol price.
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, this
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idea
will not work unless the city has already built the proper facilities for
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people
to
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use
an alternative transport,
for instance
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building
the public transport and
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cycling
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track
facilities.
However
, investing in
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building
the public transport costs more than
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cycling
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track
. This
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makes
it the most effective way
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so
far.

In conclusion
, there are several ways for the council to solve the traffic deadlock problem
especially
in
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big
cities.
However
, I am certain that
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building
the
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cycling
infrastructure is an initial course of action for
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citizens
to be able to
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use
bicycles as an alternative vehicle.
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IELTS essay "Should college be free for everyone"? Give reasons and examples to support your answers. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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