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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.447

It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 447
Movies and books influence people in many ways. One can be inspired or depressed by a book or movie. Some people show more interest to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first time, others disagree. In my view, reading a book or watching a movie is not quite interesting though it is good because I knew the story, plot and there will be no chance to assume or guess what' s going to happen next. I do not feel more interest in watching a good movie or reading a good book for the second time because I don' t feel enthusiastic and energetic. I show interest in any movie or book only if I don' t know the story and plot. For instance, I read the book ' The Fault In Our Stars' by John Green. This is one of my favorite novels. It is about the story of a young girl who has a rare disease and how she falls in love with a guy whose leg is amputated. When I read the book for the very first time I was interested in how the girl' s life transitioned from being gloomy to being happy, how her parents tried to understand her mental condition and vice versa. In addition, I did not know that there was a hero in her story too. What was going to happen in her story whether she was going to die with the disease or not, how her love life would be and other details kept my interest in the place. As you see, the uncovered secrets and suspense of the story gripped my interest in that book. On the other hand, If I read the book for second time, I am going to feel bored because I knew what is going to happen next and how the story would end up. Next, there is no chance of making a guess and assumptions when I watch a movie or read a book for the second time. Whenever I watch a movie I have a habit of assuming what is going to happen next and how the director might reveal the story and turning points in the story. For instance, when I watched a suspense thriller movie ' Raazi' , a story about a young girl who saved her country from a war by facing dangerous situations, for the second time, there was no place to guess because I knew what the female lead did in order to save her country, how the enemies found her, how she was saved and who had to die in the story. As a result, I had to see the movie without assuming or guessing the next scene. Thus, it lowered my enthusiasm and interest in watching the film. In conclusion, watching a movie or reading a book for the second time is pretty boring to me as I can enjoy only if I don' t know the plot, have some place to make a guesswork.
Movies
and
books
influence
people
in
many
ways. One can
be inspired
or depressed by a
book
or
movie
.
Some
people
show
more
interest
to
read
a
good
book
or
see
a
good
movie
the second
time
than the
first
time
, others disagree. In my view, reading a
book
or watching a
movie
is not quite interesting though it is
good
because
I knew the
story
, plot and there will be no chance to assume or guess
what&
#039; s going to
happen
next
.

I do not feel more
interest
in watching a
good
movie
or reading a
good
book
for the second
time
because
I
don&
#039; t feel enthusiastic and energetic. I
show
interest
in any
movie
or
book
only
if I
don&
#039; t know the
story
and plot.
For instance
, I
read
the
book
' The Fault In Our
Stars&
#039; by John Green. This is one of my favorite novels. It is about the
story
of a young girl who has a rare disease and how she falls in
love
with a guy whose leg
is amputated
. When I
read
the
book
for the
very
first
time
I
was interested
in how the
girl&
#039; s life transitioned from being gloomy to being happy, how her parents tried to understand her mental condition and vice versa.
In addition
, I did not know that there was a hero in her
story
too. What was going to
happen
in her
story
whether she was going to
die
with the disease or not, how her
love
life would be and other
details
kept
my
interest
in the place. As you
see
, the uncovered secrets and suspense of the
story
gripped my
interest
in that
book
.
On the other hand
, If I
read
the
book
for second
time
, I am going to feel bored
because
I knew what is going to
happen
next
and how the
story
would
end
up.

Next
, there is no chance of making a guess and assumptions when I
watch
a
movie
or
read
a
book
for the second
time
. Whenever I
watch
a
movie
I have a habit of assuming what is going to
happen
next
and how the director might reveal the
story
and turning points in the
story
.
For instance
, when I
watched
a suspense thriller
movie
'
Raazi&
#039;
,
a
story
about a young girl who saved her country from a war by facing
dangerous
situations, for the second
time
, there was no place to guess
because
I knew what the female lead did in order to save her country, how the enemies found her, how she
was saved
and who had to
die
in the
story
.
As a result
, I had to
see
the
movie
without assuming or guessing the
next
scene.
Thus
, it lowered my enthusiasm and
interest
in watching the film.

In conclusion
, watching a
movie
or reading a
book
for the second
time
is pretty boring to me as I can enjoy
only
if I
don&
#039; t know the plot, have
some
place to
make
a guesswork.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
62Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 447

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
505 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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