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Do you agree or disagree with the given statement? There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach to an educated person. Use specific reasons and examples. v.2

There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach to an educated person. Use specific reasons and examples. v. 2
With the passage of time, people nowadays are more concerned than ever to achieve the feat by studying to the higher lever as they can. The literacy rata has improved in the past decades. In my opinion, there are still cases where educated men learn from uneducated person. So, i disagree with the given prompt. I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, today most people are educated: a well-educated person know much about the bookish idea about the field he/she is in. Instead of being rich in theoretical knowledge, they can perform well in field work. That is, practical knowledge is the key to perform the work correctly and efficiently. My own experience illustrates this idea. After by completion of engineering, I joined to the hydropower construction company. According to the need of the company, I went to the field visit to observe the work and how the workers are carrying out their work. After observing the work done by the other workers who are not educated, i got surprised. They were so accurate in their calculations even without the use of the engineering formulas. I worked there for three months, i learned about many aspects that need to be considered for the effective work. Surprisingly, these minute details are never discussed in the course book study. This example illustrates that there is vast difference between the course work and the practical work. So, there are so many ways we can learn from the uneducated person that they know from their experience. Secondly, real knowledge comes from the confrontation with the difficult situations and the experience. Even if the person is not well educated and he has worked in a specific area for the long time, he can outscore tyro educated person. The scenario seen in my home is the clear example of this. My father has been operating business since three decades. My brother has just completed master in business analytics. However, he is not in the level of my father. My brother knows the idea about how business can be carried out effectively. Nevertheless, he is still immature to conduct the employee of the company. Every employee consider my father as the genuine and real person and all they shows respect to him. On the other hand, my brother is ill-tempered and cannot carry out disagreements of employee calmly. This shows that there is much to learn for my brother. It is true that he has knowledge, but he need to build him as a responsible person which he can learn from father. In conclusion, i am of the opinion that there are different aspects that an educated person can learn from an uneducated person. This is because, even if the person is uneducated, he may possess practical knowledge and experience which can be the source of inspiration. Moreover, ethical knowledge can be learned from our seniors even they are not well-educated.
With the passage of time,
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people
nowadays are more concerned than ever to achieve the feat by studying to the higher lever as they can. The literacy
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rata
has
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improved
in the past decades. In my opinion, there are
still
cases where
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educated
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men
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learn
from
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uneducated
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person
.
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So
,
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i
disagree with the
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given
prompt. I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.

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First of all
,
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today
most
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people
are
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educated
: a well-educated
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person
know much about the bookish
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idea
about the field he/she is in.
Instead
of being rich in theoretical
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knowledge
, they can perform well in field
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work
.
That is
, practical
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knowledge
is the key to perform the
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work
correctly
and
efficiently
. My
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own
experience illustrates this
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idea
. After by completion of engineering, I
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joined
to the hydropower construction
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company
. According to the need of the
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company
, I went to the field visit to observe the
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work
and how the workers are carrying out their
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work
. After observing the
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work
done by the other workers who are not
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educated
,
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i
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got
surprised. They were
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so
accurate in their calculations even without the
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use
of the engineering formulas. I worked there for three months,
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i
learned about
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many
aspects that need to
be considered
for the effective
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work
.
Surprisingly
, these minute
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details
are never discussed in the course book study. This example illustrates that there is vast difference between the course
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work
and the practical
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work
.
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So
, there are
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so
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many
ways we can
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learn
from the
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uneducated
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person
that they know from their experience.

Secondly
, real
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knowledge
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comes
from the confrontation with the difficult situations and the experience. Even if the
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person
is not well
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educated
and he has worked in a specific area for the long time, he can outscore tyro
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educated
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person
. The scenario
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seen
in my home is the
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clear
example of this. My father has been operating business since three decades. My
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brother
has
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just
completed master in business analytics.
However
, he is not in the level of my father. My
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brother
knows the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
about how business can
be carried
out
effectively
.
Nevertheless
, he is
still
immature to conduct the employee of the
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company
. Every employee consider my father as the genuine and real
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person
and all they
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shows
respect to him.
On the other hand
, my
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brother
is ill-tempered and cannot carry out disagreements of employee
calmly
. This
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shows
that there is much to
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learn
for my
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brother
. It is true that he has
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knowledge
,
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but
he need to build him as a responsible
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person
which he can
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learn
from father.

In conclusion
,
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i
am of the opinion that there are
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different
aspects that an
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educated
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person
can
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learn
from an
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uneducated
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person
. This is
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because
, even if the
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person
is
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uneducated
, he may possess practical
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knowledge
and experience which can be the source of inspiration.
Moreover
, ethical
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knowledge
can
be learned
from our seniors even they are not well-educated.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach to an educated person. Use specific reasons and examples. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
492 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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