Enjoyment of life depends on our age as we can not do all the things we want at any age. I believe young people enjoy life more than older people do. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, at a young age, we have more family members and friends around us than our old age. For this reason, we can interact with the people around us. We never feel lonely or boring anytime as there is always someone to share our opinions or thoughts. Friends and family members help us a lot to enjoy life at a young age. From my personal experience, I am at a young age now. I have lots of friends and all the family members are beside me now. So whenever I feel bored or lonely, they give me the mental support and I do not feel lonely any more. I can discuss anything with them. Two years ago I failed in an examination because of my illness. My friends and family members gave me immense mental support then and I could overcome my depression. That is why I did well in my retake examination.
Secondly, at a young age, we can do anything we want to enjoy our life. We can make a tour with friends anytime, gossip with our friends, enjoy university days with friends and so on. Most of these we can not do at our old age as the surrounding of us will be changed then. We will have very few friends and family members then. For this reason, most of the time we will feel lonely. For instance, last year I alone with some of my friends made a plan to travel Cox' s Bazar, the largest sea beach in the world. We made a plan for five days and we enjoyed ourselves a lot. We traveled all the surrounding areas of Cox' s Bazar, ate all the famous food items, took a bath in the sea, played water bikes and so on.
In conclusion, I think that enjoying life is much easier for young people than the older one. This is because young people always have many friends and family members around them and they can do anything whatever they want.
Enjoyment of
life
depends on our
age
as we can not do all the things we want at any
age
. I believe
young
people
enjoy
life
more than older
people
do. I
feel
this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all
, at a
young
age
, we have more
family
members
and
friends
around us than our
old
age
.
For this reason
, we can interact with the
people
around us. We never
feel
lonely
or boring anytime as there is always someone to share our opinions or thoughts.
Friends
and
family
members
help
us a lot to
enjoy
life
at a
young
age
. From my personal experience, I am at a
young
age
now
. I have lots of
friends
and all the
family
members
are beside me
now
.
So
whenever I
feel
bored or
lonely
, they give me the mental support and I do not
feel
lonely
any more
. I can discuss anything with them. Two years ago I failed in an examination
because
of my illness. My
friends
and
family
members
gave me immense mental support then and I could overcome my depression.
That is
why I did well in my retake examination.
Secondly
, at a
young
age
, we can do anything we want to
enjoy
our
life
. We can
make
a tour with
friends
anytime, gossip with our
friends
,
enjoy
university days with
friends
and
so
on. Most of these we can not do at our
old
age
as the surrounding of us will be
changed
then. We will have
very
few
friends
and
family
members
then.
For this reason
, most of the time we will
feel
lonely
.
For instance
, last year I alone with
some
of my
friends
made a plan to travel
Cox&
#039; s
Bazar
, the largest sea beach in the world. We made a plan for five
days and
we enjoyed ourselves a lot. We traveled all the surrounding areas of
Cox&
#039; s
Bazar
, ate all the
famous
food items, took a bath in the sea, played water bikes and
so
on.
In conclusion
, I
think
that enjoying
life
is much easier for
young
people
than the older one. This is
because
young
people
always have
many
friends
and
family
members
around
them and
they can do anything whatever they want.
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60Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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