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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study. v.2

: University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study. v. 2
There is a common topic concerning whether universities are supposed to ask their students to take basic science classes even though the courses are not part of their majors. Although some people tend to hold the idea that signing up for basic science classes is a waste of time, from my perspective, basic science subjects, such as math and literature, may have copious benefits. To begin with, basic science lessons can help the students perform well in their major learning. This is because they can provide college students with a sea of fundamental knowledge, which may help them lay a solid foundation, allowing them to have better understanding of their major courses, which are derivatives from the primary subjects. For example, it is math that can instruct its learners plenty of equations, with which they are able to gain the results which they want easily. With the help of this essential subject, students can better perceive economics. According to a survey made by Nanjing University in China, most of the Chinese economists choose math as their auxiliary course when they study their majors. In addition, basic science classes can exert a positive impact on pressure reduction. In general, some of these courses are largely different from their majors, offering distinct experience for the class-takers to accumulate, and thus helping them take their minds off their stressful major study. For example, it is literature that can render readers a virtual world, temporarily keeping them away from the reality and allowing them not to think about what they are learning at college. In contrast, if the undergraduates learn their majors repeatedly day and night, they are more likely to feel tired of their dull routine, which may greatly reduce their study efficiency. Admittedly, a few people may argue that undergraduates may waste plenty of time if they take basic science classes, which they may have already learned in high school. Besides, paying attention to the basic science classes may occupy a large part of the time that they should spend on the subjects that they are good at. To conclude, in accordance with what has been discussed above, I strongly maintain that universities had better make the policy that all the students ought to learn basic science subjects.
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to ask their
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are not part of their
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majors
. Although
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people
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idea
that signing up for
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basic
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science
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classes
is a waste of time, from my perspective,
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basic
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science
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subjects
, such as math and literature, may have copious benefits.

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begin
with,
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lessons can
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help
the
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students
perform well in their
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major
learning. This is
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because
they can provide college
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students
with a sea of fundamental knowledge, which may
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help
them lay a solid foundation, allowing them to have better understanding of their
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major
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courses
, which are derivatives from the primary
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subjects
.
For example
, it is math that can instruct its learners
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plenty
of equations, with which they are able to gain the results which they want
easily
. With the
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help
of this essential
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subject
,
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students
can better perceive economics. According to a survey made by Nanjing University in China, most of the Chinese economists choose math as their auxiliary
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course
when they study their majors.

In addition
,
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basic
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science
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classes
can exert a
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positive
impact on pressure reduction.
In general
,
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some
of these
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courses
are
largely
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different
from their
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majors
, offering distinct experience for the
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class
-takers to accumulate, and
thus
helping them take their minds off their stressful
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major
study.
For example
, it is literature that can render readers a virtual world,
temporarily
keeping them away from the reality and allowing them not to
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think
about what they are learning at college.
In contrast
, if the undergraduates learn their
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majors
repeatedly
day and night, they are more likely to feel tired of their dull routine, which may
greatly
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reduce
their study efficiency.

Admittedly
, a few
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people
may argue that undergraduates may waste
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plenty
of time if they take
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basic
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science
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classes
, which they may have already learned in high school.
Besides
, paying attention to the
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basic
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science
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classes
may occupy a large part of the time that they should spend on the
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subjects
that they are
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good
at.

To conclude
, in accordance with what has
been discussed
above, I
strongly
maintain that universities had better
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make
the policy that all the
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students
ought to learn
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basic
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science
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subjects
.
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41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay : University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
376 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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