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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.79

People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 79
Social media popularity has set up a healthy lifestyle trend as it conveys a message to the audience that being healthy is associated with the good body figure. My personal opinion is that this trend could be considered as positive. As a human being considered as a social animal, people are more aware of their self-image, and everyone wants to build a reputation in society. Since young people are educated, they prefer to look good in a beautiful dress and want to be productive in a busy lifestyle. Therefore, everyone willing to avoid obesity to make sure they prevent tiredness by regularly attending the gym. The current trend on social sites involves the promotion of a healthy lifestyle. The celebrities influence young people to intake healthy diet, such as oats, veggies, and fruits daily. For example, the famous people post regular pictures of their gym training sessions, and even as they pass on specific exercise challenges on their Instagram; as a result, this type of activity would lead to the preference of a slim figure among teenagers. Being fit can play an essential role in everyday life as people's preferences and choices have changed. For example, males with six-packs and healthy bodies would be preferred over fat males. In contrast, in the case of females, a good looking or slim figure lady would be considered attractive than others. Consequently, being healthy can lead to a productive and happy life to avoid obesity. In conclusion, nowadays, society has started to associate being slim as a healthy body, and people saw an increase in productivity with a busy schedule, which means this is a positive trend.
Social media popularity has set up a
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healthy
lifestyle
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trend
as it conveys a message to the audience that being
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healthy
is associated
with the
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good
body figure. My personal opinion is that this
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trend
could
be considered
as
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positive
.

As a human
being considered
as a social animal,
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people
are more aware of their self-image, and everyone wants to build a reputation in society. Since young
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people
are educated
, they prefer to look
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good
in a
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beautiful
dress and want to be productive in a busy lifestyle.
Therefore
, everyone willing to avoid obesity to
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make
sure they
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prevent
tiredness by
regularly
attending the gym.

The
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current
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trend
on social sites involves the promotion of a
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healthy
lifestyle. The celebrities influence young
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people
to intake
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healthy
diet, such as oats, veggies, and fruits daily.
For example
, the
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famous
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people
post regular pictures of their gym training sessions, and even as they pass on specific exercise challenges on their Instagram;
as a result
, this type of activity would lead to the preference of a slim figure among
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teenagers
.

Being fit
can play an essential role in everyday life as
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people
's preferences and choices have
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changed
.
For example
, males with six-packs and
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healthy
bodies would
be preferred
over
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fat
males.
In contrast
, in the case of females, a
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good looking
or slim figure lady would
be considered
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attractive
than others.
Consequently
, being
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healthy
can lead to a productive and happy life to avoid obesity.

In conclusion
, nowadays, society has
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started
to associate being slim as a
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healthy
body, and
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people
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saw
an increase in productivity with a busy schedule, which means this is a
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positive
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trend
.
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IELTS essay People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 79

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
274 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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