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Question 5. Integrated task. Conversation between student and a professor. The speakers discuss two possible solutions to the woman's problem. Briefly summarize the problem. Then state which solution you prefer and why. v.1

Question 5. Integrated task. Conversation between student and a professor. The speakers discuss two possible solutions to the woman's problem. Briefly summarize the problem. Then state which solution you prefer and why. v. 1
In the recent years, air communication has increased all across the globe by leaps and bounds. Although low-cost passenger flights have saved some money of travellers; however, it has also been the main reason for the increase in air traffic which has caused air and noise pollution. I believe that government should put more tax on such flights to limit air traffic. Due to lower priced flight tickets, people now frequently travel to short distant cities which mostly includes holiday destinations. These economical flights have triggered a process that ultimately results in more airport construction and congestion in air traffic. Consequently, we now have problems like air and noise pollution which is the main reason for the environmental disturbance. In order to deal with these issues, we can impose more tax on such flights to curtail traffic problems. In addition, air planes with more seating capacity can also prove to be pivotal in this cause. We can also upgrade the efficiency of our trains to travel faster to encourage people in considering railways as a good option in comparison to flights. According to a survey, 30% of air passengers are the ones who take flight to destinations which are in the radius of 500 kilometres from the place they board flights. If we can encourage these people to take trains to reach their places, we will substantially curtail air traffic. To conclude, pollution and over construction of airports can be a potential threat to our flora and fauna. People should take cognizance of this fact and further, the government should take measures to reduce air traffic as soon as possible before it does irreparable damage.
In the recent years,
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air
communication has increased all across the globe by leaps and bounds. Although low-cost passenger
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flights
have saved
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some
money of
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travellers
;
however
, it has
also
been the main reason for the increase in
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air
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traffic
which has caused
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air
and noise pollution. I believe that
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government
should put more tax on such
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flights
to limit
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air
traffic.

Due to lower priced
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flight
tickets,
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people
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now
frequently
travel to short distant cities which
mostly
includes holiday destinations. These economical
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flights
have triggered a process that
ultimately
results in more airport construction and congestion in
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air
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traffic
.
Consequently
, we
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now
have problems like
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air
and noise pollution which is the main reason for the environmental disturbance. In order to deal with these issues, we can impose more tax on such
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flights
to curtail
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traffic
problems.
In addition
,
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air
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planes
with more seating capacity can
also
prove to be pivotal in this cause.

We can
also
upgrade the efficiency of our trains to travel faster to encourage
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people
in considering railways as a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
option
in comparison
to
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flights
. According to a survey, 30% of
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air
passengers are the ones who take
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flight
to destinations which are in the radius of 500
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kilometres
from the place they board
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flights
. If we can encourage these
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people
to take trains to reach their places, we will
substantially
curtail
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air
traffic.

To conclude
, pollution and over construction of airports can be a potential threat to our flora and fauna.
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People
should take cognizance of this fact and
further
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should take measures to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
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air
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traffic
as
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soon
as possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
it does irreparable damage.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Question 5. Integrated task. Conversation between student and a professor. The speakers discuss two possible solutions to the woman's problem. Briefly summarize the problem. Then state which solution you prefer and why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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