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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individuals. v.789

Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individuals. v. 789
Environmental issues have won people' s attention in the recent years. They directly affect people' s lives. Some NGOs increase people' s awareness. They try to inform people about potential threats that imperil their livings. Some people are of the opinion that everyone should take an appropriate action for reducing the harmful effects on the environment while others hold the opposite opinion. Even though people should participate in various programs to compensate their negative influence, but I insist that the most important duty is to the government. In the following, I am willing to support my perspective by proposing two main arguments. First and the foremost reason lies in the fact that effective measures need considerable authority. Some actions can be taken just by government. I concede that everyone is part of the solution. However, we by ourselves cannot make significant changes. On the other hand, we can encourage our friends to consider environmental effects of their decisions. For example, we can vote for those politicians who have effective plans for these problems. In addition, some measures need a high level of authority that only legislators have. For instance, they can ban the use of some materials that cause harms to some animal and plant species. In that case, they can take care of these problems by appropriation of funds for them. For example, they can spend money on removing waste materials from the seas. Another subtle factor rests on the notion that benevolent actions by ordinary people can precipitate the existing problems. In other words, we have to consider various aspects of our actions. Environmental scientists should conduct research on these matters and propose a solution for them. There numerous cases that different scientists and experts have a paradoxical point of view about a problem. For example, in the last year, there was a group of local scientists who wanted to transfer some local animals to other parts of the world in order to save them from extinction. However, some scientists in the country opposed to their action since they thought that it might put other species lives to danger. In that case, they provide further information which those experts did not consider. To sum up, I would like to point out that governments should take action to environmental issues. However, people can indirectly have a great impact on the government' s policies and strategies. Not only are the government able to make great decisions and power but they have also more knowledge than individuals. We all should remember that our environment belongs to all of the creatures. Therefore, we should not violate their living right.
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issues have won
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people&
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directly
affect
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people&
#039; s
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lives
.
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Some
NGOs increase
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people&
#039; s awareness. They try to inform
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people
about potential threats that imperil their livings.
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Some
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people
are of the opinion that everyone should take an appropriate
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action
for reducing the harmful effects on the environment while others hold the opposite opinion.
Even though
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people
should participate in various programs to compensate their
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negative
influence,
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but
I insist that the most
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important
duty is to the
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government
. In the following, I am willing to support my perspective by proposing two main arguments.

First
and the foremost reason lies in the fact that effective measures need considerable authority.
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Some
actions can
be taken
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just
by
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government
. I concede that everyone is part of the solution.
However
, we by ourselves cannot
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make
significant
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changes
. On the
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other
hand, we can encourage our friends to consider
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environmental
effects of their decisions.
For example
, we can vote for those politicians who have effective plans for these
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problems
.
In addition
,
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some
measures need a high level of authority that
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only
legislators have.
For instance
, they can ban the
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use
of
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some
materials that cause harms to
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some
animal and plant species.
In that case
, they can take care of these
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problems
by appropriation of funds for them.
For example
, they can spend money on removing waste materials from the seas.

Another subtle factor rests on the notion that benevolent actions by ordinary
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people
can precipitate the existing
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problems
. In
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other
words, we
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have to
consider various aspects of our actions.
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Environmental
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scientists
should conduct research on these matters and propose a solution for them. There numerous cases that
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different
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scientists
and experts have a paradoxical point of view about a
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problem
.
For example
, in the last year, there was a group of local
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scientists
who wanted to transfer
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some
local animals to
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other
parts of the world in order to save them from extinction.
However
,
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some
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scientists
in the country opposed to their
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action
since they
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thought
that it might put
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other
species
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lives
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
.
In that case
, they provide
further
information which those experts did not consider.

To sum up, I would like to point out that
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governments
should take
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action
to
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environmental
issues.
However
,
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people
can
indirectly
have a great impact on the
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government&
#039; s policies and strategies. Not
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only
are the
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government
able to
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make
great decisions and power
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but
they have
also
more knowledge than individuals. We all should remember that our environment belongs to
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all of the
creatures.
Therefore
, we should not violate their living right.
24Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individuals. v. 789

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
437 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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