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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individual. v.696

Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individual. v. 696
Today, the environmental problem is an earnest concern in all nations. When it comes to the personal involvement in helping relieving the environment problem, many people believe the individual can do nearly nothing and it is the authorities’ job to preserve the environment. As far as I concerned, everyone is the indispensable solider in fighting against the environment problems. The force and power of an individual is limited and minor, but united together, we will ultimately become an unstoppable power and exert powerful strength in helping improve the situation. First and foremost, environmental problem is largely caused by everyone in the society. Granted, people living in the society is unaware of their actions will lead to the environment issues. After all, they may just throw several plastic bags or turn on the AC over day and night. However, just as the old saying goes: “in the avalanche, every snow flake is guilty”. It is these easy-to-ignore waste accumulated to tremendous depletion of natural resources, then finally contributes to the environmental disasters like green house effect and oceanic plastic waste. Thus, there is every reason to believe that we should raise the awareness of each individual to preserve the natural from every tiny thing around the daily life. In effect, the personal neglect of environmental preservation in the community will make the government hard to from and implement policy. Usually, the environmental preservation policies released by the government are trying to reduce the depletion of natural resources by increasing the cost of using it. For example, China in 2007 released a policy requiring every shop charge fees for plastic bags to reduce the rampant waste. However, such a fee is nearly nothing, many people still choose to add a plastic bag during shopping for convenient and left several complains about the authorities after that. They don’t understand why the government require the extra fee, that is why that policy failed. Besides, we don’t need any environmental preservation policy if everyone has the willing to preserve the environment. It is the fact that no matter the haves or the have nots, boys or girls, the young or the old, we all live in our only home, the earth. As the citizen of the beautiful earth, each of us share the common goal in preserving the natural of this planet. From the government’s perspective, environmental preservation may be a head-scratching problem. But if everyone of us raise strong awareness in participate in the activities to preserve the nature, the policy will be much easier to be implemented and the goal of living in a healthy planet will be quicker to achieve. As a result, environmental issues are never too complex to any one of us. Just like everyone can easily undermine the nature by throwing a plastic bag on the street, individual is also capable to bow down and pick that plastic bag up. Bearing my the merits and negative possibilities elaborate above, I would argue against the notion that environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individual.
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Today
, the
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environmental
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problem
is an earnest concern in all nations. When it
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comes
to the personal involvement in helping
The verb 'helping' is used with an infinitive: "to relieve" or "relieve".
relieving
the
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environment
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problem
,
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many
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people
believe the
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individual
can do
nearly
nothing and it is the authorities’ job to
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preserve
the
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environment
. As far as I concerned,
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everyone
is the indispensable solider in fighting against the
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environment
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problems
. The force and power of an
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individual
is limited
and minor,
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but
united together, we will
ultimately
become an unstoppable power and exert powerful strength in helping
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improve
the situation.

First
and foremost,
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environmental
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problem
is
largely
caused by
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everyone
in the society. Granted,
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people
living in the society is unaware of their actions will lead to the
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environment
issues.
After all
, they may
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just
throw several
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plastic
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bags
or turn on the AC over day and night.
However
,
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just
as the
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old
saying goes: “in the avalanche, every
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snow flake
is guilty”. It is these easy-to-
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ignore
waste accumulated to tremendous depletion of
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natural
resources, then
finally
contributes to the
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environmental
disasters like green
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house
effect and oceanic
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plastic
waste.
Thus
, there is every reason to believe that we should raise the awareness of each
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individual
to
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preserve
the
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natural
from every tiny thing around the daily life.

In effect, the personal neglect of
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environmental
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preservation
in the community will
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make
the
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government
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hard
to from and implement
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policy
.
Usually
, the
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environmental
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preservation
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policies
released by the
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government
are trying to
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reduce
the depletion of
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natural
resources by increasing the cost of using it.
For example
, China in 2007 released a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
policy
requiring every shop charge fees for
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plastic
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bags
to
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reduce
the rampant waste.
However
, such a fee is
nearly
nothing,
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many
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people
still
choose to
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add
a
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plastic
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bag
during shopping for convenient and
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left
several complains about the authorities after that. They don’t understand why the
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government
require the extra fee,
that is
why that
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policy
failed.

Besides
, we don’t need any
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environmental
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preservation
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policy
if
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everyone
has the willing to
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preserve
the
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environment
. It is the fact that no matter the haves or the
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have nots
, boys or girls, the young or the
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old
, we all
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live
in our
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only
home, the earth. As the citizen of the
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beautiful
earth, each of us share the common goal in preserving the
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natural
of this planet. From the
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government’s
perspective,
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environmental
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preservation
may be a head-scratching
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problem
.
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But
if
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everyone
of us raise strong awareness
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in participate in
the activities to
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preserve
the nature, the
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policy
will be much easier to
be implemented
and the goal of living in a healthy planet will be quicker to achieve.

As a result
,
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environmental
issues are never too complex to any one of us.
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Just
like
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everyone
can
easily
undermine the nature by throwing a
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plastic
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bag
on the street,
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individual
is
also
capable to bow down and pick that
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plastic
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bag
up. Bearing my the merits and
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negative
possibilities elaborate above, I would argue against the notion that
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environmental
issues are too complex to
be handled
by
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individual
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
62Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individual. v. 696

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
507 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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