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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past v.688

People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past v. 688
There is a huge reservation regarding environmental issue since deteriorating the human' s habitat can spark different detrimental effects such as climate change, air pollution, and diminishing ozone layer. This trend prompts a controversial question whether people have more ability to preserve nature and environment more properly that those living in the past. I adamantly subscribe to the belief that people nowadays people protect the environment better and more efficiently. First and foremost, accessibility to the information plays an indispensable role in leading people to implement most efficient and appropriate practices to protect the environment. The emergence of the internet has revolutionized many facets of life and one of them is enabling people to access various information in an easy and economical way. If a person wants to apply a process to protect the earth, he/she just needs to search on the different website such as Google to obtain valuable information. On the other hand, because of growing social media outlets, environmental activists can easily reach their targeted individuals to provide them consultant and enhance their knowledge. On the contrary, there was not enough information about More importantly, earth population is more able to use equipment to protect the environment. As a matter of fact, technological advancements assist manufacturer and households with the best equipment to decrease the detrimental effects of any activity in the society and economy. Admittedly, this process not only increases accessibility of the people to efficient advancement but also because of increasing attention in environmentally-friendly equipment leads private sectors to enhance the supply of these products which lead the be more economical for the public. Take a solar energy as an example, a century ago people merely used fossil energies same as oil to heat their home which because of Dioxide Carbon emission undoubtedly has severe effects on the environment. However, people nowadays are able to use solar as an alternative to fossil energies. It should be stressed that scientists could not find any bad impact of solar energy on earth.
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change
, air pollution, and diminishing ozone layer. This trend prompts a controversial question whether
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people
have more ability to preserve nature and
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environment
more
properly
that those living in the past. I
adamantly
subscribe to the belief that
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people
nowadays
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people
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protect
the
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environment
better and more
efficiently
.

First
and foremost, accessibility to the
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information
plays an indispensable role in leading
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people
to implement most efficient and appropriate practices to
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protect
the
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environment
. The emergence of the internet has revolutionized
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many
facets of life and one of them is enabling
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people
to access various
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information
in an easy and economical way. If a person wants to apply a process to
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protect
the earth, he/she
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just
needs to search on the
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different
website such as Google to obtain valuable
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information
.
On the other hand
,
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because
of growing social media outlets, environmental activists can
easily
reach their targeted individuals to provide them consultant and enhance their knowledge.
On the contrary
, there was not
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enough
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information
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importantly
, earth population is more able to
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use
equipment to
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protect
the
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environment
. As a matter of fact, technological advancements assist manufacturer and households with the best equipment to decrease the detrimental effects of any activity in the society and economy.
Admittedly
, this process not
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increases accessibility of the
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people
to efficient advancement
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also
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because
of increasing attention in
environmentally
-friendly equipment leads private sectors to enhance the supply of these products which lead
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more economical for the public. Take a solar
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energy
as an example, a century ago
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people
merely
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used
fossil
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energies
same as oil to heat their home which
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because
of Dioxide Carbon emission
undoubtedly
has severe effects on the
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environment
.
However
,
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people
nowadays are able to
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use
solar as an alternative to fossil
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energies
. It should be
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stressed
that scientists could not find any
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bad
impact of solar
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energy
on earth.
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IELTS essay People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past v. 688

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
335 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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