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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully. v.689

Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully. v. 689
creativities and planning are two indispensable part of problem solving. Some people believe that to find a solution people should have innovative ability, however some people believe that have an accurate plan plays more important role than being creative. I subscribe to the belief that having an organized planning is more important. I feel this way because of two main reasons that I am going to explore in the following essay. First and foremost, in this competitive world, planning is an integral part of success. in our everyday life, we encounter various hindrances that need precise planning to overcome it. These plans are divided into two parts. A part of human' s planning is short-term and another part is long-term. To reach the goal in either of two parts, we need to organize our time, energy, resources, and etc. Consider an employee of the company as an example. In order to reach the position of management, he needs to have five basic abilities and first one of them is goal setting and planning. it should be stressed that creativity of finding a proper solution for a difficulty is not in the list of essential abilities that an eminent management should possess. More importantly, a person is able to buy genius thoughts and products. However, the capability of planning is priceless and even if someone hires a person to plan for him, stickiness to the plan is an inborn characteristic since people cannot buy it in the labor market. As a personal example, I am a confounder of a startup named Igreg which is a platform for students to have a constant access to the tutors. We have two employees in our staff working as problem-solver in our company. If an issue occurs in the procedure of the daily work or if we want to promote our product, their job is to start brainstorming and provide us the best solution as possible. Admittedly, planning to reach any goal is my responsibility. In a nutshell, I believe that having the ability of planning is more important than thinking out of the box.
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creativities
and
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planning
are two indispensable
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part
of problem solving.
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Some
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people
believe that to find a solution
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people
should have innovative
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ability
,
however
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some
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people
believe that have an accurate
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plan
plays more
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important
role than being creative. I subscribe to the belief that having an organized
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planning
is more
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important
. I feel this way
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because
of two main reasons that I am going to explore in the following essay.

First
and foremost, in this competitive world,
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planning
is an integral
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part
of success.
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in
our everyday life, we encounter various hindrances that need precise
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planning
to overcome it. These
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plans
are divided
into two
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parts
. A
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part
of
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human&
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planning
is short-term and another
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part
is long-term. To reach the goal in either of two
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parts
, we need to organize our time, energy, resources,
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and etc
. Consider an employee of the
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company
as an example. In order to reach the position of management, he needs to have five basic
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abilities
and
first
one of them is goal setting and
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planning
.
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it
should be
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stressed
that creativity of finding a proper solution for a difficulty is not in the list of essential
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abilities
that an eminent management should possess.

More
importantly
, a person is able to
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buy
genius thoughts and products.
However
, the capability of
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planning
is priceless and even if someone hires a person to
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plan
for him, stickiness to the
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plan
is an inborn characteristic since
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people
cannot
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buy
it in the labor market. As a personal example, I am a
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confounder
of a startup named
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Igreg
which is a platform for students to have
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a constant access
to the tutors. We have two employees in our staff working as problem-solver in our
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company
. If an issue occurs in the procedure of the daily work or if we want to promote our product, their job is to
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start
brainstorming and provide us the best solution as possible.
Admittedly
,
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planning
to reach any goal is my responsibility.

In a nutshell, I believe that having the
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ability
of
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planning
is more
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important
than thinking out of the box.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully. v. 689

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
350 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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