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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For students, the ability to listen well is as important as the ability to read well v.675

For students, the ability to listen well is as important as the ability to read well v. 675
Students are required to have many skills to be able to comprehend and understand their classes. Some people might think that reading before class is more important than listening during a proefssor' s lecture and taking notes. However, I find myself agreeing with the opinion that listening is just as significant as reading. learners need to pay extreme attention to what the teacher says. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First and foremost, while reading raises questions about the topic in the students' minds, active listening will help students to get the right answers for these pondering questions. A new subject material to a student will not be easy to go through because sometimes there would be vague terms that demand further explanations. Reading help undergraduates to wonder about the meaning of concepts. Listening efficiently, on the other hand, offers the missing information to complete the puzzle. My own experience is a compelling example on that. When I was in college, I had a good habit to read before my organic chemistry class. While reading, I used to face difficulty getting the meaning behind certain ideas. Nevertheless, the professor during class used to explore all the sides of the arguments to make sure students are not lost. As a result, by lending an ear in class, I was able to do better on this course. Secondly, paying attention to what the teacher mentions in class is critical since the educator usually categorizes the curriculum into more important and less important information. The students should focus on the essential knowledge in the class and there is no way to recognize these important ideas other than attending lectures and putting some effort in listening. For instance, some courses in college were so big that it was impossible to study the entire course during the semester. During lectures, the professor used to point out the significant information that we needed to concentrate on. Consequently, this saved us a lot of time and energy. To sum up, In my view, listening is a crucial skill class that every student should perfect to guarantee success during university years. This is because it abets full comprehension of concepts and it prevents students from wasting too much time on less necessary ideas.
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, I find myself agreeing with the opinion that listening is
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learners
need to pay extreme attention to what the teacher says. I feel this way for
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reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First
and foremost, while
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reading
raises questions about the topic in the
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students&
#039; minds, active listening will
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help
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students
to
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the right answers for these pondering questions. A new subject material to a
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student
will not be easy to go through
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because
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sometimes
there would be vague terms that demand
further
explanations.
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Reading
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help
undergraduates to wonder about the meaning of concepts. Listening
efficiently
,
on the other hand
, offers the missing information to complete the puzzle. My
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own
experience is a compelling example on that. When I was in college, I had a
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good
habit to read
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before
my organic chemistry
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class
. While
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reading
, I
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used
to face difficulty getting the meaning behind certain
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ideas
.
Nevertheless
, the professor during
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class
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used
to explore all the sides of the arguments to
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sure
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students
are not lost.
As a result
, by lending an ear in
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class
, I was able to do better on this course.

Secondly
, paying attention to what the teacher mentions in
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class
is critical since the educator
usually
categorizes the curriculum into more
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important
and less
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important
information. The
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students
should focus on the essential knowledge in the
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class
and there is no way to recognize these
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important
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ideas
other than attending lectures and putting
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effort in listening.
For instance
,
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courses in college were
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that it was impossible to study the entire course during the semester. During lectures, the professor
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used
to point out the significant information that we needed to concentrate on.
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, this saved us
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time and energy.

To sum up, In my view, listening is a crucial
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skill
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class
that every
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student
should perfect to guarantee success during university years. This is
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because
it abets full comprehension of concepts and it
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prevents
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students
from wasting too much time on less necessary
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ideas
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay For students, the ability to listen well is as important as the ability to read well v. 675

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
384 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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