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1614 first Describe a radio program you enjoy listening toYou should sayWhat the program isWhen and where you listen to itHow often you listen to itAnd explain why you think it is interesting v.1

1614 first Describe a radio program you enjoy listening toYou should sayWhat the program isWhen and where you listen to itHow often you listen to itAnd explain why you think it is interesting v. 1
By watching Television, people will spend the most of the free-time. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. In my opinion, I cannot accept with the above discussion. To begin, TV set will telecast a plethora of movies programs sports and serials. Generally in free time people will watch TV that makes them lazy and they will not try to socialize with others, they will become arrogant and quite boring. For Example, I will watch tv in my free time and on weekends as well, that makes me idle I will not use mostly Facebook Whattsapp Instagram Hike its applications to socialize. I am the best relevant example, which I will not use applications mostly. I will watch movies and sports in my free-time. Consequently, But particular programs in video like news will help you know about around the world and make them updated. Watching the English news or movies makes you good at English and communication as well. So If you are socializing you should be having friends, you can contact. For example, If you are not a good at applications and not having friends, makes you better to watch station or rather have a walk outside makes you feel good. But socializing means it is a waste of time and no use of applications except discussion in Whattsapp and sharing or liking the photos in Facebook, following in Instagram, looking updates around the world to hike is the only application which you will learn the quotes and information which you can share between applications. In conclusion, by taking the above considerations in my opinion, the box will not make people lazy by watching television and will not miss the social life. It is obviously good to watch television rather than socializing which is relevant in present society. I recommend watching television rather than socializing with others.
By watching
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Television
,
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people
will spend the most of the free-time. It can
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make
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people
lazy and
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prevent
them from
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socializing
with others. In my opinion, I cannot accept with the above discussion.

To
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begin
, TV set will telecast a plethora of movies programs sports and serials.
Generally
in free time
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people
will
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watch
TV that
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makes
them
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lazy and
they will not try to socialize with others, they will become arrogant and quite boring.
For Example
, I will
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watch
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tv
in my free time and on weekends
as well
, that
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makes
me idle I will not
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use
mostly
Facebook
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Whattsapp
Instagram Hike its
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applications
to socialize. I am the best relevant example, which I will not
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use
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applications
mostly
. I will
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watch
movies and sports in my free-time.

Consequently
,
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But
particular programs in video like news will
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help
you know about around the world and
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make
them updated. Watching the English news or movies
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makes
you
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good
at English and communication
as well
.
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So
If you are
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socializing
you should be having friends, you can contact.
For example
, If you are not a
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good
at
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applications
and not having friends,
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makes
you better to
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watch
station or
rather
have a walk outside
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makes
you feel
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good
.
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But
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socializing
means it is a waste of time and no
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use
of
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applications
except discussion in
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Whattsapp
and sharing or liking the photos
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in Facebook
, following in Instagram, looking updates around the world to hike is the
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only
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application
which you will learn the quotes and information which you can share between applications.

In conclusion
, by taking the above considerations in my opinion, the box will not
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make
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people
lazy by watching
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television
and will not miss the social life. It is
obviously
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good
to
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watch
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television
rather
than
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socializing
which is relevant in present society. I recommend watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
socializing
with others.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay 1614 first Describe a radio program you enjoy listening toYou should sayWhat the program isWhen and where you listen to itHow often you listen to itAnd explain why you think it is interesting v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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