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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Computers and the internet help to make school assignments faster and easier to complete. v.563

Computers and the internet help to make school assignments faster and easier to complete. v. 563
In today' s world everything is somehow related to computers and the internet. Computers and internet help the students to do our task easily at a faster speed. So, I can say that computers and internet does help in completing school assignments. I can say this because of a few reasons which are delved deeper in the subsequent passages. Almost everything is available on the internet: we can get any information we want at a faster rate. This ease of access to information is a boon to students. My personal experience is a profound example of this. Back in school days, we were given to complete an assignment on seven wonders of the world. I was not having any book on that topic and had a deadline to meet. Then I used the internet to complete my assignment where I got a plethora of information about seven wonders of the world. In this way, I submitted my assignment on deadline by accessing information available on the internet. The computers can perform complex task easily like a no brainer. While doing assignments, managing and tracking those files become easy when performed with the aid of computer. I could elucidate this with my college degree assignments. When I was in college the assignments were colossal and it became difficult for me to take a record of data and how it should be arranged. Then I can across a software which could manage my assignments and keep a track for me. This reduced a significant amount of time, which was lost earlier in scouting that information the essay. This example shows that the computers can help manage data for you. While doing school assignments we eventually came across a hurdle where we can' t move ahead because of less understanding. Here comes the internet and computer technology at our rescue. We can search for the concepts on internet for videos and information to understand the theory behind the topic which will help us to complete the assignment with full knowledge. In conclusion, computer and internet does help students in completing their school assignments easily at a faster rate. This is because, it helps us to get the information, it manages our data and it helps us in understanding the assignments.
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, I can say that computers and internet does
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help
in completing
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school
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assignments
. I can say this
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because
of a few reasons which
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deeper in the subsequent passages.

Almost everything is available on the internet: we can
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get
any
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information
we want at a faster rate. This
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ease
of access to
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information
is a boon to students. My personal experience is a profound example of this. Back in
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school
days, we were
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given
to complete an
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assignment
on seven wonders of the world. I was not having any book on that topic and had a deadline to
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meet
. Then I
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used
the internet to complete my
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assignment
where I
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got
a plethora of
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information
about seven wonders of the world. In this way, I submitted my
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assignment
on deadline by accessing
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information
available on the internet.

The computers can perform complex task
easily
like a
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no brainer
. While doing
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assignments
, managing and tracking those files become easy when performed with the aid of computer. I could elucidate this with my college degree
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assignments
. When I was in college the
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assignments
were colossal and it became difficult for me to take a record of data and how it should
be arranged
. Then I can across a software which could manage my
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assignments
and
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keep
a
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track
for me. This
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reduced
a significant amount of time, which
was lost
earlier in scouting that
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information
the essay. This example
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shows
that the computers can
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help
manage data for you.

While doing
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school
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assignments
we
eventually
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comes
the internet and computer technology at our rescue. We can search for the concepts on internet for videos and
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information
to understand the theory behind the topic which will
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help
us to complete the
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assignment
with full knowledge.

In conclusion
, computer and internet does
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help
students in completing their
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school
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assignments
easily
at a faster rate. This is
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because
, it
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helps
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, it manages our data and it
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helps
us in understanding the
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assignments
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Computers and the internet help to make school assignments faster and easier to complete. v. 563

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
377 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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