Some people often argue about whether to opt natural process of healing or use pharmaceutical medicines given by their doctors to recover from illness. In my opinion, both the natural and medications provided by the doctors are equally effective in helping a patient to heal.
On the one hand, natural healing process are often more gentle interventions than a chemical based drugs because they are easier to process for human body. Since natural healing uses herbs, scents or body itself, the symptoms during recovery are less intense and there are no side effects of this type of intervention. For example; I twisted my ankle playing a soccer last month and I didnot took painkillers instead i applied ice and hot towel to decrease my pain. I believe a more natural approach was right approach for this injury. However, medical drugs can be better for other sickness and injuries.
On the other hand, pharmaceutical medicines are the right choice when a sickness is sudden and life-threatening. In many cases chemical drugs are more powerful and fast acting than natural healing process. In such cases, the obvious choice is to choose pharmacy drugs. A good example is my young sister sharia who is more allergic to bees and she had to use an epinephrine injection to save her life when she was stung on the beach last summer. Thankfully, my sister could enjoy her life better without much sacrifice.
In conclusion, both natural and pharmaceutical interventions can benefit peoples health. natural medicines are sympathetic to body while medical medicines have faster and intense action.
Some
people
often
argue about whether to opt
natural
process
of healing or
use
pharmaceutical medicines
given
by their doctors to recover from illness. In my opinion, both the
natural
and medications provided by the doctors are
equally
effective in helping a patient to heal.
On the one hand,
natural
healing
process
are
often
more gentle interventions than a chemical based
drugs
because
they are easier to
process
for human body. Since
natural
healing
uses
herbs, scents or body itself, the symptoms during recovery are less intense and there are no side effects of this type of intervention.
For example
; I twisted my ankle playing a soccer last month and I
didnot
took painkillers
instead
i
applied ice and hot towel to decrease my pain. I believe a more
natural
approach was right approach for this injury.
However
, medical
drugs
can be better for other sickness and injuries.
On the other hand
, pharmaceutical medicines are the right choice when a sickness is sudden and life-threatening. In
many
cases chemical
drugs
are more powerful and
fast
acting than
natural
healing
process
. In such cases, the obvious choice is to choose pharmacy
drugs
. A
good
example is my young sister sharia who is more allergic to
bees and
she had to
use
an epinephrine injection to save her life when she
was stung
on the beach last summer.
Thankfully
, my sister could enjoy her life better without much sacrifice.
In conclusion
, both
natural
and pharmaceutical interventions can benefit peoples health.
natural
medicines are sympathetic to body while medical medicines have faster and intense action.
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