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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face Communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.842

Face-to-face Communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 842
Today world is whirling with the fast and easy modes of communication available and why not? Currently every sector of the world is depended on communication from families to news channel. Communication has made the connection easy for the people of the world, also it spreads awareness and keeps populace aware of happening around them. Although various modes of communication is used by people as per their convenient but face to face method of conversation is much effective and efficient. Old fashion way of communication was very time –consuming, imagine – how would business operate if they have to wait for several days to exchange messages for their deals? Everything would be slow, resulting into low progress. But with Invention of Graham bell, offered telephone to the world that facilitate people to connect with each other in fraction of seconds. Similarly many other methods of communication are used by people of 20th century such as web and internet. But face to face conversation has shoved past all other modes of communication with its benefits of active and expressive conversation such as when people are talking face to face – they can express their views with their body gestures and facial expressions which makes most worst matters easy to resolve for example – my mother used to stroke her hand on my head while suggesting me to not waste my time watching T. v and use that time resourcefully rather than scolding on me. Cell phone and internet conversation are also useful in a scenario when we do not want to face somebody. This method help to keep two people connected despite holding grudges against each other. On the flip side face to face conversation sometimes spoil the skirmish more as it is easy to attack a person on whom you are furious. Certain profession and need of business sternly relies on face to face conversation such as psychologist need to attend his patients to counsel them and provide them desired services, same demand is mandate by the corporate world, for presenting their presentation to their clients as face to face conversation makes their lengthy explanation easy as well more appealing, with that it also helps them to answer promptly the queries of their traders. In today’s technological world also, many industry and professions depends on face to face conversations. People choose every method of communication in their daily lives to make their work and life relaxed. It is difficult to compare modes of communications although traditional way of conversation – " face to face conversation" , is preferred by people, families and businesses to convey most basic to critical messages.
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Today
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world
is whirling with the
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fast
and
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easy
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modes
of
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communication
available and why not?
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Currently
every sector of the
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world
is depended
on
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communication
from families to news channel.
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Communication
has made the connection
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easy
for the
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people
of the
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world
,
also
it spreads awareness and
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keeps
populace aware of happening around them. Although various
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modes
of
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communication
is
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used
by
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people
as per their convenient
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but
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face
to
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face
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method
of
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conversation
is much effective and efficient.

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Old
fashion way of
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communication
was
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very
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time –consuming
, imagine
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–
how would business operate if they
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have to
wait for several days to exchange messages for their deals? Everything would be slow, resulting into low progress.
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But
with Invention of Graham bell, offered telephone to the
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world
that facilitate
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people
to connect with each
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other
in fraction of seconds.
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Similarly
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many
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other
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methods
of
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communication
are
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used
by
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people
of 20th century such as web and internet.
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But
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face
to
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face
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conversation
has shoved past all
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other
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modes
of
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communication
with its benefits of active and expressive
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conversation
such as when
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people
are talking
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face
to
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face
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–
they can express their views with their body gestures and facial expressions which
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makes
Use only "worst" (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
most worst
matters
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easy
to resolve
for example
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–
my mother
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used
to stroke her hand on my head while suggesting me to not waste my time watching T. v and
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use
that time
resourcefully
rather
than scolding on me.

Cell phone and internet
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conversation
are
also
useful in a scenario when we do not want to
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face
somebody. This
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method
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help
to
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keep
two
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people
connected despite holding grudges against each
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other
. On the flip side
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face
to
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face
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conversation
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sometimes
spoil the skirmish more
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
it is
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easy
to attack a person on whom you are furious. Certain profession and need of business
sternly
relies on
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face
to
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face
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conversation
such as psychologist need to attend his patients to counsel them and provide them desired services, same demand is mandate by the corporate
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world
, for presenting their presentation to their clients as
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face
to
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face
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conversation
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makes
their lengthy explanation
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easy
as well
more appealing, with that it
also
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helps
them to answer
promptly
the queries of their traders. In
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today
’s technological
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world
also
,
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many industry
and professions depends on
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face
to
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face
conversations.

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People
choose every
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method
of
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communication
in their daily
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lives
to
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make
their work and life relaxed. It is difficult to compare
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modes
of communications although traditional way of
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conversation
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–
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face
to
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face
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conversation&quot
;
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,
is preferred
by
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people
, families and businesses to convey most basic to critical messages.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
63Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
If we spoke a different language, we would perceive a somewhat different world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay Face-to-face Communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 842

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
440 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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