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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Students are more interested in politics compared to the past. ” Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.361

“Students are more interested in politics compared to the past. ” Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 361
There are those who say that speaking fluency in other languages must be combined both with the traditional and cultural of native languages. While I mostly agree with these ideas, I realise that there are other aspects to consider. This essay will examine the reason for my opinion. Numerous studies have consistently found that learners who blended the culture of native speakers to their daily life, they improve their language skills faster than those who don't. In addition to this, learners dramatically improve their pronunciation and vocabulary. This is because of their listen to music, radio and consume other media such as YouTube or Netflix in their life. As a result of this, most of them get more confidence to talk in public or talk to native speakers and understand the real meaning of those words which depend on countries. For example, the word of dinner, some parts of Great Britain mean lunchtime not the supper meal like other countries. Moving to the second point, some people grained their speaking techniques effectively because of living with traditional families. This situation leads to their habits and routine. For instance, foreigners who live with the host families can improve their language levels by learning from their hosts promptly and this will impact directly in speaking part because they have to communicate and learn their lifestyle every day. However, it should not be forgotten that people who suffer from the communication in their work also lead to the improvement of speaking skills. For instance, officers who lack to communicate with their clients will automatically find the way to convey to the clients to make the projects flow and succeed. To sum up, the majority of success in speaking other languages is blending the cultural and traditional to their life. However, sometimes the suffering causes the improvement of speaking another language.
There are those
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who
say that speaking fluency in
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other
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languages
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must
be combined
both with the traditional and cultural of native
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languages
. While I
mostly
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agree
with these
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ideas
, I
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realise
that there are
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other
aspects to consider. This essay will examine the reason for my opinion.

Numerous studies have
consistently
found that learners
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who
blended the culture of native speakers to their daily life, they
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improve
their
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language
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skills
faster than those
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who
don't.
In addition
to this, learners
dramatically
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improve
their pronunciation and vocabulary. This is
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because
of their listen to music, radio and consume
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other
media such as YouTube or Netflix in their life.
As a result
of this, most of them
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get
more confidence to talk in public or talk to native speakers and understand the real meaning of those words which depend on countries.
For example
, the word of dinner,
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some
parts of Great Britain mean lunchtime not the supper meal like
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other
countries. Moving to the second point,
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some
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people
grained their speaking techniques
effectively
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because
of living with traditional families. This situation leads to their habits and routine.
For instance
, foreigners
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who
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live
with the host families can
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improve
their
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language
levels by learning from their hosts
promptly
and this will impact
directly
in speaking part
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because
they
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have to
communicate and learn their lifestyle every day.

However
, it should not
be forgotten
that
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people
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who
suffer from the communication in their work
also
lead to the improvement of speaking
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skills
.
For instance
, officers
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who
lack to communicate with their clients will
automatically
find the way to convey to the clients to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the projects flow and succeed.

To sum up, the majority of success in speaking
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other
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languages
is blending the cultural and traditional to their life.
However
,
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sometimes
the suffering causes the improvement of speaking another
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language
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay “Students are more interested in politics compared to the past. ” Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 361

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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